Tightly Grasps His Soul

He that walks most tall amongst men
amongst men has the furthest to fall,
when in ancient times in yonder Scar Ghyll
brazen stood the hanging tree
without redundancy.
The morning had not yet spoken
waits upon sunrise, natures trill,
only one man there stands broken
facing the north wind’s icy chill,
a storm cloud rolls in
the preacher reads the last rites
talks of redemption
this illusion stabs the mind
the noose tightly grasps his soul.

© Harry J Horsman 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Moore Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 3:49 PM
You took me there on this one! Excellent
Deo Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 8:39 AM
Yes, sometimes "this illusion stabs" us. Non-theist LORD Buddha spoke of the VOID, like ZERO, which seems nothing, yet intimates infinity. We are infinite, but not in ways the human faculties grasp ... yet! Eastern yin-yang allows death (even gallows) to coexist & inform life. Mortality makes life prevcious, with /without immortality. shalom, shalom for giving me my morning meditation today 10.16.2018. Let's FORGIVE ever
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Just stopping by to say hi to you, Harry. thanks for your comment. I have missed nearly three days here. SOme problems but all mostly resolved now!
Williams Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 5:12 AM
Wow what an ending , I can see why it ended in the Winners Circle. Brilliant write Harry....Maria
Roper Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 7:54 PM
Harry, congratulations on your placement enjoyed reading..Hugs Eve ~`*
Dietrich Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 5:34 PM
Love reviewing some of the winners and seeing your name there. Congrats, my friend.
Murray Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 11:37 AM
Poor fellow.You have us standing gaping Harry. congratulations on your placement.
La France Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 10:56 AM
Harry, congratulations on your placement in my contest. I really like how you connected all the forms to create one poem, and your theme held me till that last line, well done !
Inman Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 9:05 AM
Harry, it gives the feel of a western movie, dark and unforgiving. You capture the reader in your first two lines.
Gauthier Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Lovely dark poem, Harry. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Gentry Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 3:20 AM
Congratulations on your win! An intense poem of dark emotion using the 4 forms for the contest. Excellent!
Wigley Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 2:54 AM
Excellent, Harry, suitably dark and chilling, and so well put together. Good luck in the contest. Regards, Viv
Ashley Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 1:35 PM
Wow! Harry, an intense poem of stirring content and emotion expressed in smooth fluidity between the poetry forms required. A beautiful and masterful write.. Best wishes for a win!
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 5:35 PM
oh wow, THIS one has a stunning ending. That noose at the end. YIKES. Sure did enjoy it and how you made it all flow together like one poetry form. Maybe I should have done that way!
Andresen Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 2:55 PM
- A beautiful description, Harry - Love to read - GL in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 12:54 PM
well-knit, this remarkable poem, harry!... huggs
Salehi Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 8:14 PM
"The morning had not yet spoken waits upon sunrise"....there is no problem in our lives that can defeat the sunrise and its gentle breeze in the morning, even a rope tightly grasping our souls. No doubt a winner...
Pandit Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 6:58 PM
Excellent my friend..beautiful flow and a meaningful depiction..a winning poem Harry!
Michael Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 6:00 PM
I like it...the style...delivery...
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