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Tight Squeeze

I posed up and took a good long look, Darn it seemed so warm that nook. Eased forward slowly lining up carefully, Scared of doing damage, I entered warily. Slipped in slowly as things got a bit wet, Took my time, sizing up the tightness, Backed up a bit in my timid nervousness. Proceeded on in now as it seemed huge, Squeezed in as the wetness became a deluge. Went in deep to the welcoming warmness, Opened the door to such sweet hotness. One foot on the floor as I leaned over the back, Jammed my fingers thru the wired racks, Pressed all the right buttons no real stress, Damn garage door was stuck open to my distress. Pontiak

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Date: 9/18/2013 1:40:00 PM
Hi Carl, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 9/17/2013 12:09:00 PM
Welcome to P-Soup, Carl ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Carl (Pontiak) Chong
Date: 9/17/2013 5:29:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lisa will roam here at first opportunity.
Date: 9/17/2013 4:49:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, your debut poem was fun to read.
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Carl (Pontiak) Chong
Date: 9/17/2013 5:40:00 PM
Thanks Mustapha.
Date: 9/17/2013 2:36:00 AM
Carl, -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Carl (Pontiak) Chong
Date: 9/17/2013 5:43:00 PM
Thank you Linda, glad to be here. Hope to enjoy my time here.