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Ebony silhouettes inked by a dying sun depict two lovers in a synergy of hope. Inseparable dreams slowly morph into one subservient to the whims of compliant hearts. And azure pools reflect a tie-dyed denim sky as enchanted dreamers seal their love with a kiss. Twinkling stars confetti the emptiness of space as darkness descends and shadows swallow last light. Time seems to stand so still reality pauses and motionless they swim to the depths of their souls. (Blank Verse) 2/26/2015

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Date: 3/18/2018 9:48:00 PM
Awesome imagery "Ebony silhouettes inked by a dying sun portray lovers embraced" and "And azure pools reflect a tie-dyed denim sky as enchanted dreamers seal their love with a kiss". Lovely, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/19/2018 9:39:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/26/2015 11:26:00 PM
beautiful imagery. I was thinking the two kissing in the sky maybe were clouds. You know how they make shapes that seem so real!! Awesome final verse!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/27/2015 8:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea, for your generous support. Emile.
Date: 2/26/2015 4:06:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/26/2015 5:19:00 PM
Thanks again Sara. Emile.
Date: 2/26/2015 9:47:00 AM
The title got me and the poem fully drew me in!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/26/2015 10:04:00 AM
Thanks Richard, I always like to hear from you. Emile.
Date: 2/26/2015 9:28:00 AM
Super 7 from me my friend and this goes into my fav poem list! "And azure pools reflect a tie-dyed denim sky, as enchanted dreamers seal their love with a kiss."
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/26/2015 10:03:00 AM
Thanks Robert, your friendly words are a treat to be savored. Emile.
Date: 2/26/2015 9:17:00 AM
wow! love that line twinkling stars confetti wowow! Id love to be surrounded with such! lovely imagery and so romantic!!! :) the title goes well! //olive eloisa
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/26/2015 10:05:00 AM
Thanks Olive, you are so sweet. Emile.