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a mystical flying marauder soared in from space ten thousand years of time throughout my two hours fathom out the lake, icicle has risen an utter lack of pulse and recess of air we were both hence unmoving I rant dawn and not despair scattering pearls to steer in combers walking yesteryear to retrieve origins as global traces through inner spaces in pulse to vanish, back to beyond with a period not pressing boldness then unfolded undeniably further
1st Place Contest Winner A BRIAN STRAND INFORMEL Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 3/14/2022 9:06:00 PM
'walking yesteryear to retrieve origins as global traces through inner spaces'.... Very deep thoughts ! Dear Lasaad, your profound thoughts are far beyond my power of comprehension ! Congratulations on your win !
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Date: 3/14/2022 7:35:00 PM
"as global traces through inner spaces" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/14/2022 5:55:00 PM
Intriguing write Lasaad. Walking yesteryears--travelling back in time.
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