Ticking Time Bomb

Stress~ ticking timebomb; found peace- bomb defused. 02/22/2022 Contest: Bite Size no.37 Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/5/2022 3:58:00 AM

I am glad that you found peace. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara

Deb M

Date: 2/23/2022 8:08:00 AM

Great way of describing stress Alexis in so few words. Love this….Debx

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/23/2022 7:14:00 AM

I hear you, Alexis; stress is no fun -- music my go to. Blessings my friend. Well said.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/23/2022 5:28:00 AM

Succinct and well said, Alexis:)

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 2/22/2022 10:30:00 PM

Whoa, that was close, I'm glad you found peace to diffuse the stress. You are right, stress is dangerous! Stay well, and peaceful!! <3 ~BJ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2022 4:23:00 PM

whew Thank goodness peace was found. This reminds me of my very first poem I ever wrote in 2000. it was when I felt like a time bomb and wrote about it!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/22/2022 2:20:00 PM

A wonderful formula to distress Alexis. Something I have been working on too. I think Line will like your entry a lot. Blessings xxoo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/22/2022 1:58:00 PM

A breath, a hug, a friend, a friendly ear can all help destress.

David Kavanagh

Date: 2/22/2022 1:52:00 PM

Please tell me your secret Alexis, what colour wire did you cut lol, short and to the point cheers David

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/22/2022 12:19:00 PM

A very nice description of relief, Alexis. Best wishes for the contest, Evelyn

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/22/2022 11:46:00 AM

lol whenever we discover an ounce of peace, its putting salve on the wound of stress, hope you do this more often than not, my friend, take care Alexis, always a pleasant moment when I hear from you , much love xo