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Ticket booth requests destination manually I type your name, a mathematical equation couldn't convince me to abstain, Catching despair in my reflection streetlights flounce, dreary windowpanes tracking raindrops with affection, pining for your embrace, once again Traveling express train to heaven station platforms, fleeting by mimicking photographs in my mind, camera rolls, flicker the sky.

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Date: 2/10/2021 4:37:00 PM
Joanna, congratulations on your win in the contest with your wonderful poem, well done _Constance
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 2/10/2021 11:30:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 2/9/2021 2:59:00 PM
wonderful imagery herein Joanna captures that longing to reunite with another regardless of the distance.
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 2/9/2021 3:02:00 PM
Definitely something we can all relate to. If only it were that easy. :-( thank you for your comment
Date: 2/9/2021 7:47:00 AM
Excellent Joanna. You mentioned in a comment to Caren that you've added a couple more stanzas to the original. I'm trying to figure out the original stanza as they would all stand alone as separate pieces. Was the original then the last 4 lines? Cheers - Gary
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 2/9/2021 8:11:00 AM
Yes I wrote this poem with just the last stanza, I then added two more infront. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, and for your comment. :-)
Date: 2/7/2021 5:29:00 PM
Ethereal, succinct and wonderfully created Joanna.
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 2/8/2021 1:04:00 AM
Thank you. I've decided to add a couple more stanza's since you last read my poem. Thank you for your comment. :-)
Date: 2/7/2021 3:57:00 PM
Very imaginative write. Rather short, but very sweet.
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 2/7/2021 4:04:00 PM
Thank you. :-) I may extend it, I'm not sure yet. I like it short and sweet, I didn't feel like it need further explanation. But who knows what tomorrow brings. Take care.