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Ticket To Heaven

Ticket to Heaven


We drink from the fountain of earthly delights
Sweet to the taste, ever cool to the touch
Blushing of purity bred in our hearts
Glistened enchantment now needed so much

Beneath a rainbow’s curved ribbon effect
Painted in singular motions of love
Rippled reflections bare moonlit disguises
Memories fashioned below and above

A ticket to heaven on silver cloud linings
With only the touch of your rose petal lips
Swallowing all that affection does offer
Consuming desire in delicate sips

Breathless endeavors of water fall shimmers
Deeper we dwell inside every dream
You in my arms on this aqua blue evening
Illumined in passion, aglow in the gleam

Softy your eyes shine eternal devotion
Beautiful visions now all I can see
There is no need for this ticket to heaven
For heaven is anywhere you are with me

Good night Soupers

good nightrhyme

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John Hamilton

Date: 11/21/2018 12:49:00 PM

Softly your eyes shine eternal devotion, so many wonderful expressions of love manifest in this impeccable write, I think one of your best, I..... must...... fave!!

Chris Green
Date: 11/21/2018 1:07:00 PM

Thanks so much my friend, I appreciate your kind words today.

Constance La France

Date: 11/21/2018 11:00:00 AM

Chris, beautifully penned, with really lovely words and lines, love it, well done ~

Chris Green
Date: 11/21/2018 11:34:00 AM

Thank you so much Dear Heart

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/21/2018 4:42:00 AM

The type of love that makes us feel we are in "heaven," is rare and powerfully conveyed in your poem, Chris. If you don't need to use that ticket to heaven, perhaps you will share it :) A beautifully written verse filled with happiness and love. Have a happy Thanksgiving, my friend. Hugs, Carolyn

Chris Green
Date: 11/21/2018 8:57:00 AM

I would be more than happy to share it Carolyn, what are friends for? :) Thank you so much my dear friend, I always appreciate your visits to my poetry

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/20/2018 5:32:00 PM

You have been endowed with a voice that enchants the sternest heart and that voice you share humbly with your marvelous poetry Chris. I have to FAVE this beauty! I love the sincere quality and romantic zeal in this enchanting piece my friend! : ) xxoo

Chris Green
Date: 11/21/2018 8:56:00 AM

Connie, your comments to me are always more beautiful than any poem I could ever write. Thank you so very much my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/20/2018 4:40:00 PM

I'd like a ticket to heaven too please and thank you. You make it sound so inviting , I cannot resist. Well done Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 11/20/2018 4:47:00 PM

Thank you Pixie Dust for always being so kind to me...sure you can have a ticket, step right up to the counter, there will be one with your name on it. :)