Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Ticket To Heaven

Ticket to Heaven


We drink from the fountain of earthly delights
Sweet to the taste, ever cool to the touch
Blushing of purity bred in our hearts
Glistened enchantment now needed so much

Beneath a rainbow’s curved ribbon effect
Painted in singular motions of love
Rippled reflections bare moonlit disguises
Memories fashioned below and above

A ticket to heaven on silver cloud linings
With only the touch of your rose petal lips
Swallowing all that affection does offer
Consuming desire in delicate sips

Breathless endeavors of water fall shimmers
Deeper we dwell inside every dream
You in my arms on this aqua blue evening
Illumined in passion, aglow in the gleam

Softy your eyes shine eternal devotion
Beautiful visions now all I can see
There is no need for this ticket to heaven
For heaven is anywhere you are with me

Good night Soupers

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John Hamilton November 21, 2018 at 12:49 PM Softly your eyes shine eternal devotion, so many wonderful expressions of love manifest in this impeccable write, I think one of your best, I..... must...... fave!! Chris Green November 21, 2018 at 1:07 PM Thanks so much my friend, I appreciate your kind words today.

Constance La France November 21, 2018 at 11:00 AM Chris, beautifully penned, with really lovely words and lines, love it, well done ~ Chris Green November 21, 2018 at 11:34 AM Thank you so much Dear Heart

Carolyn Devonshire November 21, 2018 at 4:42 AM The type of love that makes us feel we are in "heaven," is rare and powerfully conveyed in your poem, Chris. If you don't need to use that ticket to heaven, perhaps you will share it :) A beautifully written verse filled with happiness and love. Have a happy Thanksgiving, my friend. Hugs, Carolyn Chris Green November 21, 2018 at 8:57 AM I would be more than happy to share it Carolyn, what are friends for? :) Thank you so much my dear friend, I always appreciate your visits to my poetry

Connie Marcum Wong November 20, 2018 at 5:32 PM You have been endowed with a voice that enchants the sternest heart and that voice you share humbly with your marvelous poetry Chris. I have to FAVE this beauty! I love the sincere quality and romantic zeal in this enchanting piece my friend! : ) xxoo Chris Green November 21, 2018 at 8:56 AM Connie, your comments to me are always more beautiful than any poem I could ever write. Thank you so very much my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose November 20, 2018 at 4:40 PM I'd like a ticket to heaven too please and thank you. You make it sound so inviting , I cannot resist. Well done Chris. Chris Green November 20, 2018 at 4:47 PM Thank you Pixie Dust for always being so kind to me...sure you can have a ticket, step right up to the counter, there will be one with your name on it. :)

Nette Onclaud November 20, 2018 at 4:31 PM enthralling my heart as you flow with a diction that charms the page and lights love's path, chris... spill ink!..huggs Chris Green November 20, 2018 at 4:46 PM Thank you much Nette for your kind words. :)

Andrea Dietrich November 20, 2018 at 12:09 PM absolutely beautiful. I just love when you write romantic poetry. Chris Green November 20, 2018 at 2:24 PM Thank you Andrea. :)

Eileen Manassian November 20, 2018 at 11:16 AM Absolutely fabulous. What a lovely piece. the flow is impeccable and the images captivating. Well done. Chris Green November 20, 2018 at 11:36 AM Thank you so very much Eileen. I am happy you enjoyed it.

Janice Canerdy November 19, 2018 at 8:09 PM SO beautiful--such moving imagery, Chris! Janice Chris Green November 20, 2018 at 9:55 AM Thank you so very much Janice.

Sunlite Wanter November 19, 2018 at 6:28 PM It's so easy to "fall into" your love poems and be mesmerized. Another good one. Chris Green November 20, 2018 at 9:54 AM What a nice thing to say to me my friend. Thank you so much Sunlite. Can I offer you a hand to help you get back out again? : )