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Thursday On My List

For some reason, Thursdays find me warped both in a space of inertia and hyperactivity. Perhaps the anticipation from hitting work deadlines on a Friday creates havoc within my frail psyche.


Half-awake, I forget the kitchen's GPS--where is it?
With lungs soaked on oolong tea leaves, 
Fingers dribble on a Japanese mug, now cold
And jaybirds' drowsy talk wouldn't bring me to reality
Car keys jangle by the table's edge...
I am on auto-pilot mode:
Until a quick bath reminds me there's LIFE after 6 am!
Hair swept in a bun, time screams fashion alert
Lunch comes  goes as I stare on a white screen;
THE boss hovers by that I piano the board
Racing project's notes on page 3
Yet every darn line seems inane!
Finally, I get my groove
Come late afternoon, an outgoing box is cleared!
Whistling, these hips zumba   in the room, well, lightly...
How feet race uptown to view jazz events
Reservations done
For winsome friends--our Saturday's thrill!
Evening crawls while I gorge on pasta
Then mild breathwork to release drained energy--
Netflix? Not! Thursday is my scourge!
How Breezes' tune carouses
When in a flash, night stars blind me
That something knocks me out--
An impertinent Friday afterthought, maybe.


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8/1/2019
Writing Challenge 3, July 2019 - List Contest
Sponsor: Dear Heart
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Sergi Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 4:23 PM
Hi nette! I enjoyed every sentence of your special day poem... and I suppose you might have another day of your bucket list! This will be one of my faves! Ralphie
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 2:47 PM
Hello Nette, that is a list for Thursday.It is quite a list. Have a nice day my friend.
Wanter Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 9:55 AM
Love it, Nette!!!!! Gave me a big smile.
La France Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 6:57 PM
Nette congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write
Merryman Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 9:10 PM
Creatively written, Nette! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
Andresen Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 4:25 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Anish Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 8:47 PM
Fine "list" poem here. Thursday is coming up soon - don't get too stressed. A jazz concert sounds nice. My nephews play in a band called Ghost Funk Orchestra - they set a poem of mine to music. Go to Demon,Demon Ghost Funk Orchestra - you can hear it there. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Andresen Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 7:57 AM
- A well done list, Nette :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Delaney Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 4:38 AM
Lists....we all make them but no-one as charmingly as you do. Love this little window into your world. Luv, SuZ
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August 3, 2019 at 4:41 PM
You certainly know how to spend your days Nette, although filled to the brim, you can look back on your week and feel happy and satisfied with it. a splendid write my friend, an absolute brainstorm of a poem. Hugs, Jennifer.
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August 3, 2019 at 9:23 AM
What an artfully delicious piece Nette. Hugs Rick.
Sergi Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 3:58 PM
Dear nette! This beautiful poem reminds of a short story I read by sci fi writer Ray Bradbury. If I find it , I'll send it to you...Ralph
Mchattie Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 3:43 PM
That's quite a list my friend. Where do you find the time? Great piece. Stay frosty my friend.
Callus Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 5:17 AM
You always amaze me Nette, how you manage to turn ordinary things into captivating poetry! This is one such example...very creative; worth reading more than once. a fav ~ Hugs // paul
Anish Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 9:09 PM
Hope this missive finds you and yours well. I hope you do well in the contest - from what I can see you should! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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