Thursday On My List

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For some reason, Thursdays find me warped both in a space of inertia and hyperactivity. Perhaps the anticipation from hitting work deadlines on a Friday creates havoc within my frail psyche.


Half-awake, I forget the kitchen's GPS--where is it?
With lungs soaked on oolong tea leaves, 
Fingers dribble on a Japanese mug, now cold
And jaybirds' drowsy talk wouldn't bring me to reality
Car keys jangle by the table's edge...
I am on auto-pilot mode:
Until a quick bath reminds me there's LIFE after 6 am!
Hair swept in a bun, time screams fashion alert
Lunch comes  goes as I stare on a white screen;
THE boss hovers by that I piano the board
Racing project's notes on page 3
Yet every darn line seems inane!
Finally, I get my groove
Come late afternoon, an outgoing box is cleared!
Whistling, these hips zumba   in the room, well, lightly...
How feet race uptown to view jazz events
Reservations done
For winsome friends--our Saturday's thrill!
Evening crawls while I gorge on pasta
Then mild breathwork to release drained energy--
Netflix? Not! Thursday is my scourge!
How Breezes' tune carouses
When in a flash, night stars blind me
That something knocks me out--
An impertinent Friday afterthought, maybe.


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8/1/2019
Writing Challenge 3, July 2019 - List Contest
Sponsor: Dear Heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/9/2019 4:23:00 PM
Hi nette! I enjoyed every sentence of your special day poem... and I suppose you might have another day of your bucket list! This will be one of my faves! Ralphie
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Date: 9/3/2019 2:47:00 PM
Hello Nette, that is a list for Thursday.It is quite a list. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 8/14/2019 9:55:00 AM
Love it, Nette!!!!! Gave me a big smile.
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Date: 8/12/2019 6:57:00 PM
Nette congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write
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Date: 8/8/2019 9:10:00 PM
Creatively written, Nette! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 8/8/2019 4:25:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/7/2019 8:47:00 PM
Fine "list" poem here. Thursday is coming up soon - don't get too stressed. A jazz concert sounds nice. My nephews play in a band called Ghost Funk Orchestra - they set a poem of mine to music. Go to Demon,Demon Ghost Funk Orchestra - you can hear it there. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/5/2019 7:57:00 AM
- A well done list, Nette :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/4/2019 4:38:00 AM
Lists....we all make them but no-one as charmingly as you do. Love this little window into your world. Luv, SuZ
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Date: 8/3/2019 4:41:00 PM
You certainly know how to spend your days Nette, although filled to the brim, you can look back on your week and feel happy and satisfied with it. a splendid write my friend, an absolute brainstorm of a poem. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/3/2019 9:23:00 AM
What an artfully delicious piece Nette. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 8/2/2019 3:58:00 PM
Dear nette! This beautiful poem reminds of a short story I read by sci fi writer Ray Bradbury. If I find it , I'll send it to you...Ralph
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Date: 8/2/2019 3:43:00 PM
That's quite a list my friend. Where do you find the time? Great piece. Stay frosty my friend.
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Date: 8/2/2019 5:17:00 AM
You always amaze me Nette, how you manage to turn ordinary things into captivating poetry! This is one such example...very creative; worth reading more than once. a fav ~ Hugs // paul
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Date: 8/1/2019 9:09:00 PM
Hope this missive finds you and yours well. I hope you do well in the contest - from what I can see you should! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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