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Throw-Back Bliss

Family bonding times decades ago Can never be buried in oblivion Since they can be fully resurrected Via uploaded delightful pictures With hashtags, “joyous reminiscences.” Here am I succumbing to “throw-back” bliss Of our home’s mirth with Dad, Mom and siblings Warmed by love's glow in praying together While feasting on God’s blessings midst trials Thanking Him for peace, faith, mercy and grace!* *2John 1:3 Grace be with you, mercy, and peace, from God the Father, and from the Lord Jesus Christ, the Son of the Father, in truth and love. September 28, 2018 3rd Place, "Lines of ten that remind you what it was like back then" Poetry Contest; Sponsored by Silent One; judged on 10/5/2018.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 10/11/2018 7:58:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Beata. Well done.

Beata Agustin
Date: 10/11/2018 10:19:00 PM

Praise God. Thanks for constantly encouraging me thru your comments. God bless you. Congratulations likewise.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/7/2018 5:34:00 PM

I enjoyed reading, Beata, congratulations on your win. :)

Beata Agustin
Date: 10/11/2018 10:19:00 PM

Praise God. Thanks for constantly encouraging me thru your comments. God bless you. Congratulations likewise.

Silent One

Date: 10/5/2018 6:30:00 AM

Congratulations on place in the contest..

Beata Agustin
Date: 10/11/2018 10:20:00 PM

Praise God. Thanks for the opportunity to be a part of your contest. Thanks likewise for the placement and comments. God bless you!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/1/2018 5:36:00 AM

So true; it's always wonderful to look back at those great memories. Glad you chose them for the subject of your poem.

Beata Agustin
Date: 10/1/2018 7:25:00 AM

Praise God. Thanks for your comment. God bless you!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/28/2018 3:35:00 AM

I did not know what blank verse was, and I still do not, but I know what heart is, and this poem has heart in a giant way! A refreshing way to end my night/morning.

Beata Agustin
Date: 10/1/2018 7:24:00 AM

Praise God. Thanks for your comments. As for the meaning of blank verse, this is Poetry Soup's definition, "A type of poetry, distinguished by having a regular meter, but no rhyme. In English, the meter most commonly used with blank verse has been iambic pentameter. Blank verse, however, is not the same as free verse because it employs a meter." God bless you!