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Through Their Eyes

Wearing all black so I'd blend in with the night, waited in a city back alley till the time was right, hearing approaching footsteps, got my knife ready, steadily and quietly creeping up upon him, plunged it in his heart so he'd die instantaneously, grabbed his wallet and got out of there fast, walking quickly I started counting the cash, then I walked up to the old run down apartment, went in and got to the door and knocked upon it, Lou answered and said "you got the dough?" I nodded yes and opened the billfold, returning to my own place I went into the bathroom, taking the needle out I jabbed it into my arm, feeling euphoric once again as the heroin started working its charm... 8-1-2016 For "Through Their Eyes" contest. Addendum: In no way, shape or form do I advocate the use of ANY drugs as this write is purely fictional and for the contest based on murder...

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Date: 8/7/2016 8:48:00 AM
Hi Cheryl, You have penned a chilling and dark write . Best of luck for the contest-Alexis
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 8/7/2016 7:26:00 PM
Thanks so much for the visit and kind comment Alexis!:)
Date: 8/5/2016 9:28:00 AM
Wow...this is original!!! Love it love it love it!!!!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 8/5/2016 9:31:00 AM
Thanks so much for your visit and encouraging words Pace!:)
Date: 8/4/2016 8:59:00 PM
Powerful write my friend...well done!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 8/5/2016 9:30:00 AM
Thanks so much Mike, that is encouraging words my friend!:)
Date: 8/3/2016 8:45:00 AM
Yep. Drugs, alcohol, most vices are demons with entire personalities that take possession of your body and soul. Best not let them in to begin with.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 8/3/2016 8:49:00 AM
Yes, that is why I personally steer clear of any of that crap!:)
Date: 8/3/2016 1:50:00 AM
Chilling indeed..all the best:)
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 8/3/2016 8:33:00 AM
Thanks so much for your visit and nice comment Jo!:)

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