Through the Looking Glass

The city hung upside down,
an almost perfect copy,
unblemished by any movement 
on the water that set a glaze upon 
the morning. Later, I saw ferns 
and a red bromelia caught
in the still of a backyard pond
and in the clearest counterfeit 
of all, me passing across a mirror 
in a florist's window before
disappearing somewhere 
beyond its gilded frame.

As a child, head stuck
halfway through the looking glass 
of a book, I longed to push 
through into that reflected world.
It was there, I thought, I existed
in counterpoint, having all 
that troubled me reversed 
into the opposite.
My real home was
on the other side, not here,
crossing a boundary 
that should never have been 
crossed, fallen through a crack
in a dream, lost,
with no way back.


Note.
Title taken from Lewis Carroll's 
" Through the Looking Glass "
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Mcintosh Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 1:23 AM
Exceptional. Love it. God bless you, Love, Gina
Willason Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 12:17 AM
Thanks Gina. Good to hear from you...your comments valued and your support very much appreciated. Paul
Lane Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 7:23 AM
I think I comprehend your meaning, Paul. As the middle child, I sought my own escape inside the covers of books. Often, wishing I could be one of the characters. Fantasies are not always meant just for children. To exist in 'counterpoint..' great word choice.
Willason Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 5:00 PM
Childhood often marked by such feelings of separation and, as you commented, not the exclusive domain of the child. A common theme these days. Thankyou for your comments, sincerely appreciated.
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