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Through the Looking Glass

The city hung upside down, an almost perfect copy, unblemished by any movement on the water that set a glaze upon the morning. Later, I saw ferns and a red bromelia caught in the still of a backyard pond and in the clearest counterfeit of all, me passing across a mirror in a florist's window before disappearing somewhere beyond its gilded frame. As a child, head stuck halfway through the looking glass of a book, I longed to push through into that reflected world. It was there, I thought, I existed in counterpoint, having all that troubled me reversed into the opposite. My real home was on the other side, not here, crossing a boundary that should never have been crossed, fallen through a crack in a dream, lost, with no way back. Note. Title taken from Lewis Carroll's " Through the Looking Glass "

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Date: 5/11/2023 1:23:00 AM
Exceptional. Love it. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/12/2023 12:17:00 AM
Thanks Gina. Good to hear from you...your comments valued and your support very much appreciated. Paul
Date: 5/10/2023 10:19:00 AM
Obviously I love this. I don't feel I should jump into the pages of a book but that some small refinement is all that's needed to fix my sense of not quite belonging.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/10/2023 4:55:00 PM
Strange how a part of us always feels somewhat on the outer, belonging elsewhere. Probably motivates us on a quest for answers, self discovery, even to write a poem. Thanks DD for your Comments.
Date: 5/10/2023 7:23:00 AM
I think I comprehend your meaning, Paul. As the middle child, I sought my own escape inside the covers of books. Often, wishing I could be one of the characters. Fantasies are not always meant just for children. To exist in 'counterpoint..' great word choice.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/10/2023 5:00:00 PM
Childhood often marked by such feelings of separation and, as you commented, not the exclusive domain of the child. A common theme these days. Thankyou for your comments, sincerely appreciated.

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