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How in moonlit dusk winging low Arms stroke, up down in thrilled embrace... Where lips press firmly, breaths aglow To taste summer's rush-- its wild chase! ............. Originally Written 5/09/2019 Excerpt from 'Romancing Summer' ~Line Spacing Revised ................. Arbitrium Divisa 2 Poetry Contest of Gregory R Barden Re-post: 6/25/2019

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Date: 7/17/2019 10:07:00 AM
Nette, congrats on your win for this sensual breathtaking piece. Hugs, John
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Date: 6/26/2019 2:38:00 PM
Summertime, a carefree, joyous, love infused season - all of this depicted in your awesome write, Best wishes my friend. Hugs and blessings , Jennifer.
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Date: 6/25/2019 3:59:00 PM
You've got a winner here, nette. Great to hear from you and glad you enjoyed Pa Goose's tales. I'm thinking about a series of them based on bedtime tales and my daughter has suggested titling them "Pa Goose's Bedtime Stories" - I like that. Bob
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Date: 6/25/2019 1:04:00 PM
A definite season for fun. Well done, nette!
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Date: 6/25/2019 8:50:00 AM
This is hot Nette. Hugs Rick
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Date: 6/25/2019 7:25:00 AM
I temember this one and this stanza stands out on its own. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 6/25/2019 6:20:00 AM
Times running out...lovely take on the last of summer love...
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Date: 6/25/2019 12:43:00 AM
You poetic words are so strikingly romantic and sumptuous, Nette! Great write and good luck in the contest! :)
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