Threesome

i’m remembering the three of us the dull pain I felt walking along the way she looked at him Dave Austin

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 12/13/2014 4:18:00 PM

Sheesh, I'm listening to ConTe Partiro~ANDREA BOCELLI's Time to Say Goodbye. Good riddance to any of those wagging thoughts! Snow here...lots of it; now that's something I'd like to say that to.:( Keep well, stay warm...love, Mikki

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2014 7:39:00 PM

Hi, Daver, thanks for your visit today!! Hope you had a lovely day.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 12/2/2014 6:03:00 AM

Perfect description of being the odd man out. Great poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2014 11:00:00 PM

I LOVE this, Daver. I can relate to one like this. it probably happens to everyone at least once in their lives. a FAVE

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/1/2014 6:10:00 PM

Life is chock full of little pains. Succinct and to the point! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Jan Allison

Date: 12/1/2014 4:18:00 PM

ooh how sad... unless you were walking a dog lol:-( Hugs Jan xx