Three Wishes On a Sandy Beach

It was a hot summers day
Along the beach I walked
I came upon a strange bottle
And it entered my thoughts

Hearing stories so young
About genies and lamps
Cowboys and Indians
Gypsies and tramps

I sit on the sands
Holding this bottle of old
If this was my genie
What am I about to be told

On the bend of its neck
Theres a golden rim
I give it a rub
As I get a feeling from within

I have been granted three wishes
But there are rules to be adhered
No resurrection or money
No more wishes will be spared

My very first wish
Is to go way back in time
To watch York Minster being built
A grand cathedral so fine

The second of my wishes
Is also to the past
To the times of the Dinosaurs
Earths giants that did not last

The third and last of my three wishes
American lands first white man
To protect whats rightfully theirs
And leave their destiny, in their hands
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 7:29 PM
Hey, I had not seen this yet. Congratulations on a great win!~ Andrea
Murphy Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 12:42 PM
very nice congrats faleshia
White Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 9:09 AM
Vast and varied wishes- Congrats on your win- at the least the American Indians have billions now to ease their pain of their great losses- there are so many here in California that have told me how their grandparents were pushed out of their last rights and then finally, their land
Anderson Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 8:42 AM
Congrats on your 2nd Place win in the contest! Very nice, my friend! Jimmy
Richards Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 7:53 AM
Congratulations, James!! Hope you will know that you are missed, and will come back soon! Love, Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 8:25 PM
Congrats James on your 2nd place win in Amy's Wishes contest.. so honored to be sharing spot number two with my favorite Highlander... luv.. as u enjoy your special victory... "Sweetheart"
Peranteau Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 6:36 AM
Fantastic visual here Mr. Fraser ! And my wish would to have been a follower of Christ, right there with Him ! A delightful poem to inspire thought Sir ! TY james
Mehta Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 9:24 PM
A well expressed wishes. I enjoyed it
Culverhouse Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 6:24 PM
enjooyed!!
M Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 5:22 PM
Nice wishes to go back to 3 different times of history. Understanding your love for nature, James, I assume your desire to be one of the first settlers on the American shores (second to the native Americans) is driven by your beautiful imagination of the untouched, wild, natural and plush American land in it's most beautiful state. I'm not sure whether your desire includes solitude of being one of the few residents of the area. A hard life to be expected, protecting your own in harmony w/natives
A  Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 4:55 PM
Way to go, love the imagination in your entry good luck in the contest,, Irma
Kendrick Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 2:40 PM
Interesting wishes...Not sure what your meaning is in the last one...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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