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Three Wishes

Three wishes granted me – my first would be that I’d not show, especially on my face, my aging! How I hate the lines and sag. I’d wish to stop them ever taking place. The second wish I’d make is for one thing more necessary than impressive wealth. If I might have it also for the ones I love, I’d wish for all of us good health! Wish three is what I think most people want - to have a life of peace and happiness. If all the world could have it too, I’d say forget my first wish. I’ll take one wish less! Oct. 25, 2018 for Kevin Shaw's Three Wishes Poetry Contest

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Date: 10/29/2018 7:58:00 PM
Three wonderful wishes, I certainly get #1, and #3, the best for last. A lovely poem from your heart.Andrea
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Date: 10/26/2018 9:13:00 AM
Aww, what a wonderful poem, Andrea, I love the last wish. Deep down, that is what we all truly wish for. Best of luck. John
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Date: 10/26/2018 9:01:00 AM
Oh your first stanza, Andrea, you certainly would not need that first wish..you have so much beauty within, for as long as anyone on this site, you have made folk feel ever so special,,and i guess my wish would have to be,,to be like you!
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Date: 10/26/2018 8:17:00 AM
This is outstanding, Andrea... Such splendid wishes, beautifully expressed. A winner in my book! ;)
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Date: 10/26/2018 5:51:00 AM
Your wishes are so divine..beautiful sentiments!
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Date: 10/25/2018 11:59:00 PM
Beautiful wishes I wish will come true one day! You have been a busy lady. I write about one to your five! Brava! This is lovely! : )
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Date: 10/25/2018 11:47:00 PM
No one can wish for more than world peace and happiness. You have run away with the cup here, Andrea.
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Date: 10/25/2018 10:11:00 PM
Wishing you all the happiness in the world! Very nice Andrea...Best wishes...Charlie
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Date: 10/25/2018 10:08:00 PM
So sweet, Andrea. You deserve all your wishes, love your altruism. Line xx
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