Three Sister Owls

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Last night I asked my sisters
Why they were not hooting
Little owl said no one missed her
She would hoot when she so suited

Middle owl asked why did I care
Hooting is not what it used to be
Go 'google' hooters if you dare
For more than you ever want to see

'Hoot hoot hooray,' I hooted proudly
Wise owl like me knows to overlook
I will try to hoot quite loudly
And follow directions in the owl book

I helped little sister build a warm nest
Assured her everything would be 'owl' right
Middle sister decided it would be best
If we showed 'whoo' we are tonight

Darkness falls, noise is clearer
An incessant convolution of forest sounds
Each in a place where all can see her
Three sister owls hooting upside down

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Written 2-3-2016
For Owls Personification Contest by Eve Roper
2nd Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/5/2016 7:15:00 PM
I enjoyed your unique take on the owl theme. Very entertaining and well written, Susan... Congrats on your win as well!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 3/5/2016 7:59:00 PM
Thanks Kelly! Very kind of you and appreciate you took time to read and comment too.
Date: 2/16/2016 12:40:00 PM
Susan, Congratulations on your "Owls Personification form WIN." Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/16/2016 8:42:00 PM
Thank you, Linda! :)
Date: 2/16/2016 11:42:00 AM
Susan, your poem is so delightful. I can only imagine the tug of war Eve must have struggled with trying to judge these masterful writes! I adored yours! #7
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/16/2016 8:42:00 PM
Thank you, Connie. Isn't that the truth? I appreciate your comments and a 7! Awesome.
Date: 2/16/2016 2:04:00 AM
You owls made hoots and whoo, and mine just made whoo......who made a better whoo? find-out and tell me whoo.... cheers
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/16/2016 8:40:00 PM
Lol! Birds of a feather...?? :)
Date: 2/16/2016 1:13:00 AM
Wonderful write Susan n so is the win.. big congrats!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/16/2016 1:30:00 AM
Thanks so much Dr. It was fun. :)
Date: 2/15/2016 10:53:00 AM
I enjoyed this write...Congrats on your win Susan...
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/16/2016 1:29:00 AM
Why thank you so much Joseph! Glad you did. :)
Date: 2/15/2016 10:37:00 AM
Congrats well done xxxx
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Date: 2/16/2016 1:28:00 AM
Thank you Wendy! Hugs...
Date: 2/15/2016 10:10:00 AM
Nice poem, Susan, and congratulations!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/16/2016 1:27:00 AM
Thank you Lin!
Date: 2/15/2016 9:35:00 AM
Great take on the owl theme, Susan. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/16/2016 1:27:00 AM
Thank you Sandra! It was fun. Hugs...
Date: 2/15/2016 7:13:00 AM
Hoo..ray. Congratulations for your prize winning write, Susan. Well deserved. Peace
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Date: 2/16/2016 1:26:00 AM
lol thanks Daniel! I appreciate this wonderful comment. :)
Date: 2/15/2016 3:53:00 AM
Beautiful personification, Susan. Many congrats on your top notch placement. Elaine
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Date: 2/16/2016 1:25:00 AM
Why thank you so much for this awesome comment! Take care...
Date: 2/14/2016 10:46:00 PM
Susan, your “Three Sister Owls ” was wonderful! Thank you so much for writing a very special poem for my contest I was honored. Happy Valentine’s Day Hugs Eve
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/16/2016 1:24:00 AM
Thanks so much Eve! Also thank you for sponsoring. It was a fun contest and I'm honored to have been recognized. :)
Date: 2/7/2016 7:27:00 PM
Thanks for the reply
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Date: 2/5/2016 1:16:00 AM
Hi Susan, I am glad you think Contest are fun, cuz I love sponsoring contest, haha, that is fun too. I have a 23-year-old daughter who's going to run a contest tomorrow. Look out for it. Her name is ROYAL.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/7/2016 2:48:00 PM
Thanks Linda! Her contest must have filled up fast. I missed it but will be checking out her poems and more contests. So neat y'all can share this. :)
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Date: 2/5/2016 1:16:00 AM
Love LINDA
Date: 2/4/2016 11:43:00 AM
Good Poem. Wishing best for contest. Anisha D
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/5/2016 1:13:00 AM
Thank you Anisha for reading and commenting. Very kind.
Date: 2/3/2016 8:37:00 PM
ahhh, this is way sweet, Susan. I sure enjoyed it! Whoo whoo!!!
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Date: 2/5/2016 1:12:00 AM
:) Thanks Andrea for reading. Whoo whoo back at ya!
Date: 2/3/2016 6:25:00 PM
Sounds like a real "hooten nanny" Lots of fun, great write.
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Date: 2/5/2016 1:15:00 AM
lol! Thanks Daniel... Nice of you to give a hoot :)
Date: 2/3/2016 6:05:00 PM
this was one hoot of a read :P, enjoyed Susan.. good luck in the contest:) @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/5/2016 1:10:00 AM
:) Thanks Linda! Glad you enjoyed. Contests are fun mostly.. thanks! hugs...
Date: 2/3/2016 3:54:00 PM
absolutely delightful write Susan and I love the beautiful image good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/5/2016 1:07:00 AM
Why thank you Jan! So nice of you and I'm glad you enjoyed.
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