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Three Sister Owls

Last night I asked my sisters
Why they were not hooting
Little owl said no one missed her
She would hoot when she so suited

Middle owl asked why did I care
Hooting is not what it used to be
Go 'google' hooters if you dare
For more than you ever want to see

'Hoot hoot hooray,' I hooted proudly
Wise owl like me knows to overlook
I will try to hoot quite loudly
And follow directions in the owl book

I helped little sister build a warm nest
Assured her everything would be 'owl' right
Middle sister decided it would be best
If we showed 'whoo' we are tonight

Darkness falls, noise is clearer
An incessant convolution of forest sounds
Each in a place where all can see her
Three sister owls hooting upside down

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Written 2-3-2016
For Owls Personification Contest by Eve Roper
2nd Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Deschler Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 7:15 PM
I enjoyed your unique take on the owl theme. Very entertaining and well written, Susan... Congrats on your win as well!
Gentry Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 7:59 PM
Thanks Kelly! Very kind of you and appreciate you took time to read and comment too.
A   Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 12:40 PM
Susan, Congratulations on your "Owls Personification form WIN." Always ~LINDA~
Gentry Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 8:42 PM
Thank you, Linda! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 11:42 AM
Susan, your poem is so delightful. I can only imagine the tug of war Eve must have struggled with trying to judge these masterful writes! I adored yours! #7
Gentry Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 8:42 PM
Thank you, Connie. Isn't that the truth? I appreciate your comments and a 7! Awesome.
Salehi Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 2:04 AM
You owls made hoots and whoo, and mine just made whoo......who made a better whoo? find-out and tell me whoo.... cheers
Gentry Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 8:40 PM
Lol! Birds of a feather...?? :)
A. Sharma Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 1:13 AM
Wonderful write Susan n so is the win.. big congrats!
Gentry Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 1:30 AM
Thanks so much Dr. It was fun. :)
May Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 10:53 AM
I enjoyed this write...Congrats on your win Susan...
Gentry Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 1:29 AM
Why thank you so much Joseph! Glad you did. :)
Rycroft Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 10:37 AM
Congrats well done xxxx
Gentry Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 1:28 AM
Thank you Wendy! Hugs...
Lane Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 10:10 AM
Nice poem, Susan, and congratulations!
Gentry Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 1:27 AM
Thank you Lin!
Haight Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Great take on the owl theme, Susan. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
Gentry Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 1:27 AM
Thank you Sandra! It was fun. Hugs...
Turner Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 7:13 AM
Hoo..ray. Congratulations for your prize winning write, Susan. Well deserved. Peace
Gentry Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 1:26 AM
lol thanks Daniel! I appreciate this wonderful comment. :)
George   Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 3:53 AM
Beautiful personification, Susan. Many congrats on your top notch placement. Elaine
Gentry Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 1:25 AM
Why thank you so much for this awesome comment! Take care...
Roper Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 10:46 PM
Susan, your “Three Sister Owls ” was wonderful! Thank you so much for writing a very special poem for my contest I was honored. Happy Valentine’s Day Hugs Eve
Gentry Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 1:24 AM
Thanks so much Eve! Also thank you for sponsoring. It was a fun contest and I'm honored to have been recognized. :)
A   Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 7:27 PM
Thanks for the reply
A   Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 1:16 AM
Hi Susan, I am glad you think Contest are fun, cuz I love sponsoring contest, haha, that is fun too. I have a 23-year-old daughter who's going to run a contest tomorrow. Look out for it. Her name is ROYAL.
Gentry Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 2:48 PM
Thanks Linda! Her contest must have filled up fast. I missed it but will be checking out her poems and more contests. So neat y'all can share this. :)
A   Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 1:16 AM
Love LINDA
Dutta Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 11:43 AM
Good Poem. Wishing best for contest. Anisha D
Gentry Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 1:13 AM
Thank you Anisha for reading and commenting. Very kind.
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 8:37 PM
ahhh, this is way sweet, Susan. I sure enjoyed it! Whoo whoo!!!
Gentry Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 1:12 AM
:) Thanks Andrea for reading. Whoo whoo back at ya!
Turner Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:25 PM
Sounds like a real "hooten nanny" Lots of fun, great write.
Gentry Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 1:15 AM
lol! Thanks Daniel... Nice of you to give a hoot :)
A   Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:05 PM
this was one hoot of a read :P, enjoyed Susan.. good luck in the contest:) @-> LINDA <-@
Gentry Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 1:10 AM
:) Thanks Linda! Glad you enjoyed. Contests are fun mostly.. thanks! hugs...
Allison Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 3:54 PM
absolutely delightful write Susan and I love the beautiful image good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Gentry Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 1:07 AM
Why thank you Jan! So nice of you and I'm glad you enjoyed.
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