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Three Gifts For Mother

Flowers for Mother although sinus disagree distant she gazes a gift of candy her sweet tooth joyous pleasure blood sugar rockets a splash of perfume her favorite gift, seduction honey bee's gather ___________________________ Contest ~ "Senryu For Mother" Poet ~ Rick Parise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Dr Hitendra Mehta
Date: 5/9/2011 1:15:00 AM
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Many congrats ^Rick for coveted 1st place in Francine's contest with imagination at its best in this one. Was away hence bit late in wishing/responding. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/7/2011 1:24:00 PM
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Creative win..Congrats..Sara
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Michael J. Falotico
Date: 5/4/2011 1:46:00 PM
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Congrats Rick on your1st place!!!
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 5/4/2011 12:33:00 PM
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Congratulations ^Rick on your win in Francine's contest "Senryu For Mother". Love, Carol
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John Freeman
Date: 5/4/2011 11:48:00 AM
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Rick, Great to see you at the top again, my friend. Congratulations on your first place with this honored presentation. Agape, Moses
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 5/4/2011 10:23:00 AM
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Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Rick
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 5/4/2011 6:31:00 AM
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congrats on your big win..enjoyed. BG
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Kash Poet
Date: 5/4/2011 2:29:00 AM
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Congrats Rick on your 1st place win-kashinath
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/3/2011 11:25:00 PM
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How sweet and humorous too. Perfect senryu examples. Congratulations, Rick.
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 5/3/2011 10:34:00 PM
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wow, toppers, rick!! kudos for the glory win! :) huggs, nette
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 5/3/2011 9:02:00 PM
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Congrats Rick on your first place win in Francine's contest for Mom.. with this stunning entry my friend.. super write luv..
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Tahera Mannan
Date: 5/3/2011 8:46:00 PM
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Three very special gifts Rick. Lovely. Many warm congrats for this win.
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Shani Fassbender
Date: 5/3/2011 7:47:00 PM
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Awesome Winner!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 5/3/2011 5:54:00 PM
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yes ..very tongue in cheek, poor Mom, lace hankies would be good? Congrad's so happy to share the spot with you! Light & love
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Carrie Richards
Date: 5/3/2011 5:53:00 PM
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How did I miss this funny gem?? Congratulations...I love it!!
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Francine Roberts
Date: 5/3/2011 5:32:00 PM
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congrats on your first place win in the senryu for mother contest Rick, perfect senryus
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Francine Roberts
Date: 4/24/2011 1:18:00 PM
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thanks for entering my contest Rick
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