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Thoughts of An Old October Elm Tree

Thoughts of an Old October Elm Tree My browning leaves decry My farewell to Mrs. Summer and her plush; With her desperate gasping push Against cold and coming days. When Ms. Spring thrust her first rose bud, Putting to bed Old Man Winter’s last blow, then I wondered would I see her again; So many times he had come and gone. And now, now again, My silhouette thinned against a new dawn. Will the old man win? Or a new Ms. Spring discover me gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/6/2017 6:36:00 PM
Sad old tree whose life is near ended. There must be something for him to look forward too. We had an old Elm in the backyard when I was a child wen it died it was never forgotten that was 62 years ago. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 10/31/2017 6:53:00 PM
what wonderful personification Sunlite, I adore the Autumn but can now feel the winter chill in the air:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/27/2017 5:43:00 AM
Hello Sunlite, A wondrous personification of the Old October Elm Tree. And the corresponding photo image is perfect and helps to illuminate the verses even more. Superb Work!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 10/26/2017 10:45:00 AM
Dear Sunlite Wanter: Nicely done. Leon
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Date: 10/25/2017 7:35:00 PM
A thoughtful inquiry..well articulated poem SW!
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Date: 10/25/2017 2:56:00 PM
A beautiful poem Sunlight. How quickly things can change. Have a great day!
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Date: 10/25/2017 12:07:00 PM
Sun, I love your personification poem of the elm tree, well done!
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Date: 10/25/2017 3:39:00 AM
Wow, wow, now this is a very awesome Personification write my friend! This is the way they should be written! I really loved the way you expressed the old tree's emotions of the seasons! In fear of death, that winter might bring! I really loved your amazing piece this morning, such a powerful poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/24/2017 9:35:00 PM
A beautiful write Sunlite. Wonderful personification and I especially love your third stanza, lovely imagery. Enjoyed!
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Date: 10/24/2017 6:57:00 PM
This is so creative and lovely, great write!
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