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Thoughts of An Old Elm Tree

Thoughts of an Old Elm Tree I am tired, oh, so tired, My dried brown leaves are falling, I am losing my looks before my time, In the hot dry unnatural heat’s Appalling late summertime, and so I dream of last year’s emerald lush, Of intermittent sweet raindrops, Even fall’s first cold blush, even so Was gentle in its bearing me into winter’s sleep. My dear leaves crumble and crackle around Thick hard veins like an old man’s hands, And in my waving reverie, I wonder of winter, Will I sleep the the sleep of the old in September and Miss the colors of fall and Christmas time? I am tired, oh, so tired.

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Date: 8/24/2018 3:50:00 PM
Great personification. The summer here was brutal for trees. I imagine they all are tired of it.
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Date: 8/11/2018 4:45:00 PM
Your personification of a tree is impeccably written and heart felt dear poet. Thank you for sharing, give that tree a hug for me. xo
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/11/2018 5:24:00 PM
My comment disappeared, so I'll try again. Thank you, dear fine poet for your comment and your understanding of its meaning.
Date: 8/11/2018 1:18:00 PM
It is great , poetic and awesome how u express in metaphor here. Beautiful how u say ' emerald lush' , I luv referring to greenery as emeralds so I was glad u did too. Kudos for this wry muse poem. Pleez do write your thoughts /comment under my newest poem too.
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Date: 8/11/2018 12:26:00 PM
As we grow older, eventually we all feel like this old Elm tree! Wonderfully personified, you have creatively captured the emotions of those of us who are aging:-)! Love and hugs. Pandita
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Date: 8/11/2018 5:24:00 AM
Perfect personification. I also felt this way, because when the TREE/elm refuses to ACCEPT the present situation, it begins to think like an older human. Lots of lessons that God uses with your words/heart. shalom, shalom SW. Anil
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/11/2018 5:45:00 PM
So glad you liked this poem. Shalom to you, too.
Date: 8/10/2018 5:29:00 PM
such wonderful personification Sunlite:-) I do love the transition of the seasons especially from summer to autumn, but it is happening all too soon this year. hugs Jan xx
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/11/2018 5:46:00 PM
Your nice comment is really appreciated, Jan.
Date: 8/10/2018 5:22:00 PM
I love how you identify that human like connection we have with trees in this lovely poem Sunlite. They are a treasured part of our world and they do show their age as we do. Beautiful! : )
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/11/2018 5:49:00 PM
Connie, I grew up in the desert and mountains, but learned to appreciate its beauty, and then my family moved into North Texas and I've learned to appreciate the trees. They're just like people sitting with me in my back yard. I've had the best of both worlds, except the sea.

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