Thoughts of An Old Elm Tree

Thoughts of an Old Elm Tree

I am tired, oh, so tired,
My dried brown leaves are falling,
I am losing my looks before my time,
In the hot dry unnatural heat’s
Appalling late summertime, and so
I dream of last year’s emerald lush,
Of intermittent sweet raindrops,
Even fall’s first cold blush, even so
Was gentle in its bearing me into winter’s sleep.
My dear leaves crumble and crackle around 
Thick hard veins like an old man’s hands,
And in my waving reverie, I wonder of winter,
Will I sleep the the sleep of the old in September and 
Miss the colors of fall and Christmas time?
I am tired, oh, so tired.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krampe Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 3:50 PM
Great personification. The summer here was brutal for trees. I imagine they all are tired of it.
Rose  Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 4:45 PM
Your personification of a tree is impeccably written and heart felt dear poet. Thank you for sharing, give that tree a hug for me. xo
Wanter Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 5:24 PM
My comment disappeared, so I'll try again. Thank you, dear fine poet for your comment and your understanding of its meaning.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 1:18 PM
It is great , poetic and awesome how u express in metaphor here. Beautiful how u say ' emerald lush' , I luv referring to greenery as emeralds so I was glad u did too. Kudos for this wry muse poem. Pleez do write your thoughts /comment under my newest poem too.
Sietesantos Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 12:26 PM
As we grow older, eventually we all feel like this old Elm tree! Wonderfully personified, you have creatively captured the emotions of those of us who are aging:-)! Love and hugs. Pandita
Deo Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 5:24 AM
Perfect personification. I also felt this way, because when the TREE/elm refuses to ACCEPT the present situation, it begins to think like an older human. Lots of lessons that God uses with your words/heart. shalom, shalom SW. Anil
Wanter Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 5:45 PM
So glad you liked this poem. Shalom to you, too.
Allison Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 5:29 PM
such wonderful personification Sunlite:-) I do love the transition of the seasons especially from summer to autumn, but it is happening all too soon this year. hugs Jan xx
Wanter Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 5:46 PM
Your nice comment is really appreciated, Jan.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 5:22 PM
I love how you identify that human like connection we have with trees in this lovely poem Sunlite. They are a treasured part of our world and they do show their age as we do. Beautiful! : )
Wanter Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 5:49 PM
Connie, I grew up in the desert and mountains, but learned to appreciate its beauty, and then my family moved into North Texas and I've learned to appreciate the trees. They're just like people sitting with me in my back yard. I've had the best of both worlds, except the sea.
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