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Thoughts

~racing thoughts on a treadmill, no end in sight…~

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/19/2010 7:55:00 AM

aaack! how one could relate to this-- hard to get off that train of thoughts! but at least yours is on a treadmill and you get exercise from it-- me forever sitting, lazy lazy me :p --- keep running :) hugs-- nikko :)

James Fraser

Date: 12/12/2010 12:12:00 PM

Like an everending circle, kool Monoku >> James :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/10/2010 7:04:00 PM

Wilma, I see I got so busy this week, I missed some of your latest posting. Love your monoku this week, both of them. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/9/2010 7:55:00 AM

Have been on a treadmill a few minutes ago Wilma my friend and how true your lines..words racing a mile a minute ...without end.. luv.. good luck in the contest for Constance ... remember to put your name on it and her name and contest name luv.. good luck ..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/9/2010 6:39:00 AM

Focusing on writing sometimes helps..Great one line..Reads like a winner for we all can relate to this that has happened to all of us at one time or another..I appreciate the understanding remarks on work about That Moment...Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/9/2010 12:08:00 AM

you are not wrong Wilma, created some interest with this poem. Harry

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 12/8/2010 11:30:00 AM

wonderful imagery Wilma; I can totally relate! Lay

Joy Wellington

Date: 12/6/2010 9:00:00 PM

I smiled, reading this one, just thinking of my thoughts racing on a treadmill. Good luck! Joy (Jew)

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/6/2010 4:16:00 PM

Exactly they way my mind races...quite often as soon as my head hits the pillow! Well done, Wilma! :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 1:22:00 PM

Nice thought well expressed, Good Luck, Wilma

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/6/2010 12:22:00 PM

Been there but on exercise bike instead lol...best of luck my love with this good approach to the contest...with love from me to you...Michael

Poet Tacito

Date: 12/6/2010 11:50:00 AM

Excellent, Wilma!! =)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/6/2010 11:46:00 AM

Oh, this is how I feel when I try to sleep at night, Wilma. Superb monoku! Best wishes in Constance's contest with this awesome write. Love, Carolyn

James Peranteau

Date: 12/6/2010 10:50:00 AM

Oh, there were racing thoughts alright ! Last time that I was on a tread mill, I was getting a stress test for the 'ol ticker, lol...that juice they shoot in ya makes your head rush ! Great lil' write here dear poet ! much love, james

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/6/2010 10:41:00 AM

A very clever Monoku, Wilma. Hoping your week will be wonderful..and wishing you blessings for this holy season! Love, Audrey

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/6/2010 10:32:00 AM

wonderful line, good luck in the contest