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Don’t try to change me I thought you liked me as I am A simple girl A simple life With simple things I don’t need all That fancy stuff And complicated lifestyle I don’t like it Don’t try to change me I thought you liked me as I am AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on September 17, 2019

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 9/18/2019 4:53:00 PM

Fantastic! I like you for who you are! A good soul!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/18/2019 8:41:00 PM

Thank you so much, Timothy. I'm happy to clarify that the "me" in this poem is not me. It was a little exercise in putting myself in someone else's shoes.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/18/2019 2:12:00 PM

Good points in this poem. We all wanted to be loved for who we are. People do try to change us..it's sad Panagiota

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/18/2019 2:50:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Panagiota.