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Thou Shalt Not Kill

Thou Shalt Not Kill We think in a court of law . . . Where the death sentence is being carried out Use of the Holy Bible should never be allowed For this breaks one of the Almighty Lord God’s Moral imperatives in the Ten Commandments Whereby, He declared: “Thou Shalt Not Kill.” Our verdict on this subject is . . . This action is certainly not a man-given right To do such an immoral thing. The very executors . . . Of such a heinous sentence Are no better than the Monsters they kill, But kill them they do. We as human beings . . . Truly must be better than this. Or is this trait an indelible aspect of our psyche And our collective Cosmic DNA? Perhaps down the line . . . God himself gives these particular sinners A full taste of His Divine Redemption or His Divine Retribution. His Choice. The death penalty is not justice at all . . . It’s just an easy way of getting rid of problems And sweeping them conveniently under the rug. Life is truly sacred . . . “Thou Shalt Not Kill” A timeless Christian virtue. All of us, as thinking intelligent creatures . . . Who inhabit this Earth Should devoutly treasure this divine commandment. Amen! Amen! Amen! Liam McDaid and Gary Bateman – October 24, 2014 (Free Verse Collaboration)

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Date: 11/1/2014 1:06:00 PM
Food for thought here many things intertwine in life, many results from one action..' I will return to your page again..'
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/1/2014 1:16:00 PM
joe thank you so kindly for the wonderful comment truly heartfelt appreciated
Date: 10/27/2014 2:59:00 AM
Your poem has inspired me to write my own interpretations and musings of Scripture. If you have time you might like my newest one called Our Limited Understanding.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/27/2014 4:11:00 AM
will be a pleasure to read tim thank you dear friend for the wonderful comment bless you
Date: 10/26/2014 6:27:00 AM
this so much true.. :) i have one poem that entitles: taking lives: just or unjust if my memory serves me right.. this poem is thoughtfully written.................. but somehow killing has been more prevalent nowadays than ever before... sad that in this times that this is happening...
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/29/2014 2:44:00 AM
:) with such thoughtful write.. you deserve it.. :) God bless you.. :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/26/2014 8:41:00 AM
oh olive you could get me started i am against taking a human life at all costs we all pay the prince for living in the end wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated dear friend
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/26/2014 6:28:00 AM
in healthcare.. there is one ethical issue.. that is the DNR.. or euthanasia..
Date: 10/25/2014 12:22:00 AM
Awesome spiritual collaboration Liam old pal..Well done!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/25/2014 12:36:00 AM
nice to see you buddy thank you for the wonderful comment truly heartfelt ken deeply appreciated
Date: 10/24/2014 6:12:00 PM
An interesting work, it is a great colaboration between two excellent minds, I'm glad to read this tonight, cheri Thanks Also for your comments on my poems also
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 6:56:00 PM
so sweet of you cherl thank you deeply wonderful comment and its always a pleasure reading you material
Date: 10/24/2014 4:05:00 PM
So true. This darker side of humanity...we must learn to keep under control. Somehow, I fear that we won't.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 6:54:00 PM
yeah i would look at it on the darker side myself wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated thank you ever so kindly
Date: 10/24/2014 3:32:00 PM
The most wonderful thing about Democracy is, the Freedom to do as we please. But to do as we please has been taken for granted, and persons, sadly, do as they please. People have different views on such, this must be respected. We vote within a Democracy, laws, and they have to be respected also. Within any Democracy, there are many minds now, all thinking differently, and we'll never ever have the happy medium of agreement..... James.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 6:48:00 PM
james it sure is a democracy but this is how we feel on an every delicate subject thank you kindly for your wonderful comment dear friend
Date: 10/24/2014 2:26:00 PM
and... another AMEN ! Excellent portrayal of what has become a very cheap aspect of our lives.... life itself !!! YES!!! Liam... Let's get it out there and start saying it like it is.. !! Xx~Xx
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 6:42:00 PM
how it is kim smiling be both agreed on this subject love how you said cheap aspect of our lives excellent view on this thank you kindly deeply appreciated dear friend
Date: 10/24/2014 1:15:00 PM
God also calls his people to follow the laws of the land. I personally am not in favour because of the possibility of executing an innocent person in error. If not for the death penalty we would not now be redeemed for Christ would not have been crucified. That is the ultimate example of all things being used for good. His plans are beyound our understanding.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/26/2014 11:36:00 PM
I think all of the Bible need be understood in it's entirety. Didn't Israelites go from different cities and towns killing the evildoers? I'm not condoning that violence is the answer, but in certain areas it seems, it's less black-and-white.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 1:25:00 PM
they are far beyond any understanding richard i must agree but his law on tablet thou shalt not kill smiling pal wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated
Date: 10/24/2014 12:35:00 PM
Well said Liam and Gary. Murder is murder and should never be looked at as being justified.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/24/2014 3:28:00 PM
Ditto!! Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 12:48:00 PM
brenda thank you kindly pal that is exactly how i see it wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated
Date: 10/24/2014 11:49:00 AM
You know this was a very beautiful piece graced with your deepest thoughts. To tell you the truth I'm not sure where I stand on capital punishment. It does say Thou shalt not kill and yet it also says Do unto your neighbors as they would do unto you. But perhaps it is not our place to carry out earthly judgement... and leave that up to God. I'm not sure where I stand...
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/26/2014 11:39:00 PM
Excellent points, Gary! I don't trust our current government to implement capital punishment... too much corruption and abuses. I don't know if the problem will at anytime soon be solved... but I also wonder whether or not "kill" just means to take another's life or if it means to take the life of an innocent. NOT trying to be argumentative I just find it a fascinating conversation.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/24/2014 3:27:00 PM
Timothy, I think one of the underlying points unspoken in this piece is, that those guilty of these really bad crimes, etc. should go to prison (and not be released, especially release early like they do here in some of the European countries). Recently, in the USA there have been a number of people executed who were actually framed and were innocent. Quite troubling. Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 12:16:00 PM
smiling timothy your mind will tell you what is true right in the end timothy wonderful comment dear friend but do unto thy neighbors as they would do unto you killing is not mentioned he said though shalt not kill
Date: 10/24/2014 9:03:00 AM
Beautiful prayer lian, “It’s just an easy way of getting rid of problems And sweeping them conveniently under the rug” , very good insight, less expanse for the state. Bless you and stay firm :) eve
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 9:13:00 AM
so true now does the true guilt not lie with the exceutioner at the end of the day eve breaking a commandment now that is not justice execuating them on words swore on the good book wonderful comment eve dear friend deeply heartfelt appreciated bless you

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