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July 22, 2025

Contest: Those We Love
Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose


 

Those we love don't go away, they walk beside us everyday. Their murmurs, soft, in tree leaf whisper defrosts my heart that did grow crisper with grief that stained inside and out when I existed with my doubt that vanished voices of my yesteryear would come alive and stir the atmosphere. Breezy hands, they touch my shoulder, rustling lilac plumes and growing bolder— as shaking purple scent awakens my recall of June bouquets that did enthrall. Polaroid moments in mindful frames can flare or tame these mournful flames. Our days were filled with cheer and dare; but now, their souls, they fly as clear as air or sit to contemplate as still as moss. They come to help alleviate my loss; I see them in the blue of sky or wisp of cloud, or sunshine warmth spilled over crowd; I catch a glimpse in happy eyes and sense they’re there in spirits' guise. A moment here and then they’re gone, beyond white veils of angel-air-chiffon. I’ve come to know and feel inside that never-ending, they’ll reside within me always, and everywhere. To sense them near, fulfills my humble prayer.

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Date: 7/23/2025 1:11:00 AM
Oh Susan how incredibly beautiful and heart touching! I love this poem from beginning to end…..my favourite line being “beyond white veils of angel-air-chiffon”!! You have a gift…..Debx
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Date: 7/22/2025 7:43:00 PM
Beautiful, soulful musings of love and longing, reminiscing on fond memories and retaining vibrational connect of hearts even when distance separates us from our loved ones.
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Date: 7/22/2025 4:57:00 PM
wonderful, flowing rhyme scheme. Your words touched me in many ways. I loved the 'poloroid moments' verse as well as the last one. I share your feelings and perspective. Best wishes with the contest.
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Date: 7/22/2025 3:07:00 PM
I don't know why but this just doesn't feel like you. Can't put my finger on it but maybe because it's an outright rhymer. In any case, missing loved ones is an outstanding take on the theme. Whatever one believes from a religious standpoint, we can all agree they will always reside in our hearts. Glad you keep posting here Susan despite the occasional drama
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