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Those Stars Still Shine

I remember when you held my hand all night You may not remember such a simple gesture But a special time in a galaxy, I will never forget My palm clasped in yours, through comforting rest Nothing was ever quite the same as that time One night, two hands, connected making our own stars Sparkling in the darkness, with a peaceful silence A connection grasped by inability to let go And... those stars still shine! Heidi Sands 8/29/22

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/30/2022 9:13:00 PM

It is so gratifying to read all your poems, Heidi. You are a person who appreciates the 'small things' in life. And shows how big they really are. Thanks!! :) gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/31/2022 5:37:00 AM

Thank you very much Gershon. There is importance in simplicity. I appreciate your visit and kind comments :)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/30/2022 11:52:00 AM

Certainly deserves an exclamation mark at its end! Aloha!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/30/2022 12:29:00 PM

I will take your advice. Thank you Rico :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/30/2022 11:49:00 AM

Hello Heidi, I read romance in this poem.Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/30/2022 3:12:00 PM

Hello Heidi, when the sky is clouded at night, there are no stars. Also because because of the street lamps. Yet ometimes i do see the stars shine. Hugs.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/30/2022 12:28:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and comment Darlene. Hugs :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/30/2022 5:46:00 AM

Wonderfully reminiscing holding hand of love. A beautiful write, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/30/2022 6:02:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. I am grateful for your comment and support. I hope you enjoy the day :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/30/2022 5:25:00 AM

Heidi, this is so profoundly beautiful! I live " making our own stars" I know that feeling! And that they still shine is such a tribute to love! This is wonderful! Happy Tuesday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/30/2022 6:01:00 AM

Thank you Mike. I appreciate your visit and kind input. Happy Tuesday :)

Michael Tor

Date: 8/29/2022 6:00:00 PM

Heidi this is so beautiful and touching. Truly depicts that special someone in one's life. I really enjoyed reading. Blessings hon. How are you doing?

Michael Tor
Date: 8/30/2022 9:14:00 PM

Thank you Heidi will keep praying for you... God bless you...

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/30/2022 5:12:00 AM

I am happy you enjoyed reading about this special time. I am doing ok thanks. It has been a rough Spring and Summer and not getting any easier. I appreciate your support and blessings. You are kind and make a positive difference here. I hope you have a nice day. :)