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Those First Few Lines

It's tough to pen those first few lines It happens to me all the time Anew I start idea-less With pounding head, internal stress I often yearn to just resign... It matters not if sun does shine I need some rules, some fixed guidelines To launch a verse into process Those first few lines You may suggest a glass of wine To help me find my inner rhyme I tried that once, my pen regressed Out spilled an alcoholic mess Which sober judged as asinine -- Those first few lines

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Date: 8/27/2019 4:05:00 PM
Thanks for the conveyance of the impossible whilst I stare at me blanks ~ Aloha William
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/27/2019 8:26:00 PM
I'm staring holes into the paper myself, lately. Thanks, William. :) gw
Date: 8/23/2019 5:01:00 PM
Certainly made me chuckle because it's so true! Quite reassuring to know someone as talented as yourself has the same struggles. Think this has to be up there as one of your best Gershon. Sincere best wishes. RT
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/24/2019 9:38:00 PM
Thanks for the compliment... Hope I'm truly worthy of it... Let's keep writing and spurring each other on!! Best wishes, gw
Date: 8/23/2019 3:19:00 PM
Excellent Rondeau Gershon, much enjoyed. :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/23/2019 3:31:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Gary. Appreciated. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 8/23/2019 1:22:00 PM
Giggles ;D, Sweet ink my friend! xomo
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/23/2019 2:36:00 PM
Thank you Sweet G <3
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/23/2019 1:43:00 PM
My heart sings and zings, seeing your comments. When you're away, I lose altitude. :) gw
Date: 8/23/2019 12:53:00 PM
Gershon, with great wit you depict the frustrations of we "bards" - for the record I also have trouble with the last few lines to convey what I was talking about!!! Thanks for your kind words the Autumn Leaves - Bob
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/23/2019 1:42:00 PM
Hey, Bob: Guess what? I have trouble with those last few lines too... And then there's the middle... Gosh it ain't easy being a genius, eh?! LOL. Best wishes, gw
Date: 8/23/2019 12:33:00 PM
It is probably the hardest part of writing poetry...those opening lines...especially for me...I've found the early mornings are best and sometimes reading the masters enlightening...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/23/2019 1:41:00 PM
It's so hard for me too, whenever I first sit down on any given day to write... Whatever works, I say. :) gw

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