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Those Falling Leaves - Chanso

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/15/2023 10:28:00 AM

Terrific nature chanso Jan. Beautiful Autumn imagery. Congratulations! :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/11/2023 7:04:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this lovely piece, Jan. Janice

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/11/2023 6:30:00 PM

I sometimes wonder whether a tree grieves… Congratulations, Jan!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/26/2023 6:06:00 AM

- Lovely written, Jan :) - I don't even dare to try this form... (way too much thinking:))) - hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 5/26/2023 9:15:00 AM

I copied Kim's Petrichor example but for the contest i dont think you have to use the last word from the second line for the next stanza, i think she just wants consistency of syllables and rhyme. hugs jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/26/2023 1:54:00 AM

A wonderful poem. Well done.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/26/2023 9:13:00 AM

thanks Victor:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/25/2023 1:43:00 PM

A strange format, Jan (to me, anyway), but you’ve created a lovely poem. I especially like your first verse…

Jan Allison
Date: 5/25/2023 11:19:00 PM

I have to say it's not been my favourite challenge lol. i copied Kim's format from her Petrichor poem where she used the last word from the second line, but i don't think its something i would do again. Hugs jan xx

Arlo Parker

Date: 5/24/2023 7:05:00 PM

Autumn pop! :o)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/25/2023 11:18:00 PM

thanks AP x

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 5/24/2023 2:20:00 PM

Beautifully penned, such a deep pondering, and it makes one actually wonder. This is a brilliant write Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2023 2:54:00 PM

Thanks BJ I hope I have done it correctly, I followed kim's Petrichor poem as an example:-) hugs Jan xx