Thorns

THORNS          
Saw    a   flower   on   a   dung   heap  ,
Rose _ petal    delicate ,    graceful     like    a    queen
Swinging   proudly    on    a    barbed   wire    fence
Among    her     rough     slum- dwelling     friends  ,
Suddenly  ,   shockingly  ,   shedding   all    grace
She   spat    such    vituperative    fire
At   her   enemy - friend
That   it    dispelled   all    my   fears
She   had     thorns  ,
Her   tools   for    survival  .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hamza Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 9:24 PM
thanks Lynda and Skat
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February 21, 2016 at 10:39 AM
Noman, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 28, 2015 at 3:17 AM
I've never seen a format like this Norma, it makes the read very interesting. I love the Graceful Rose standing like a queen. ha... thanks goodness for the thorns... love it. SKAT
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