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Thorn Birds Keep Rising

You hear them singing Thorn birds, the color of ash roses Their sweet voices ascending Swirling in deep blue sky

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/5/2010 11:25:00 AM
Beautiful. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Gregory. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/5/2010 10:16:00 AM
I think you meant you instead of your It also seems unfinished but I would like to hear how it ends and what you mean by ash roses. Right now it sounds like gargly-goop.
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