This trembling bird

I saw 
the rosella
fly down
to the dirt.

I wish
to hold
this trembling bird, 
until
it rests
in the curve
in my hand,
until
it trusts
and belongs.

But wings
are for flying
free –
so I only wish,
and think
what might be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Hind Avatar
May 17, 2026 at 4:51 PM
Lovely, a little sad
Swan Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 1:18 PM
Thanks Daniel, Small birds have so much colour and life in them, they fly so free, have beautiful and soft feathering, and they are just the size of cupped hands, yet just out of reach. Maybe that's why they evoke connection with people.
Rodgers Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 6:22 AM
Jeanette, your poem beautifully captures the delicate balance between the desire to protect and the need for freedom. Your imagery of the rosella trembling on the dirt evokes a sense of vulnerability and longing. Your words convey a heartfelt wish to provide comfort and safety, yet also acknowledge the importance of allowing the bird to soar freely. It's a beautiful reflection on the complexities of compassion and letting go. - Blessings, Daniel
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