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Apprehensively I tramp with my lamp - through a path shrouded in gloom Silvery shafts of light entwine and fight through foliage as they creep Gnarled branches twist as I resist their sinister outstretched grabbing reach With a hushed bated breath I move in stealth - to allow the restless spirits sleep I have heard and have feared the ancient Mystical stories that are told Of a fabled cave of age where these immortal spirits abide A sacred and elated reverie this questing soul with them seeks To allow ‘The Oracles’ now - to show where my elusive love hides I have heard it expressed in a blessed rapturous appellation This glowing love from above that eludes this restless yearning child A bliss infused kiss that Celestial Beings have been heard to applaud A connection of perfection that would make Heaven look down and smile In my quest to find the nest of undying unconditional love I search alone to find my throne in the mighty caverns of the sphere May the spirits guide until I find my bride in barren breaths of cold And now I see in this mystic cavity an apparition does appear In a gentle voice I do rejoice and hold captive in their chambers My son are you the one seeking lasting love in our golden grotto I say yes and will you bless my jaded journey thus far I have made We’re beings of infinity descending divinity as above so below I fall to my knees as they say with ease - Feel the vibes of the stone Before you embark look within your heart - Love explodes there and beyond I shed a tear with a cavernous cheer and find where I have failed My soul anew now I'm due for my love to be Spiritually spawned
Acknowledgement from Maria (Down Under) - To my very dear friend and Poet Extraordinaire`-The illustrious (((Winged Warrior)), for producing this collaboration together with me. It is no surprise at the effortless speed of this production - virtually overnight (because of the time difference), and then another night with the sprucing up. It was good fun and we must do it again WW. POTD 19 September 2017 Music by Yakuro – ‘Through The Galaxy’ - Published on Mar 22, 2016 Copyright – Maria Williams and Winged Warrior – September 2017

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Date: 4/23/2018 11:19:00 AM
Lovely collaboration, Maria and WW.
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Date: 10/11/2017 6:30:00 PM
I think you two are poetic geniuses!
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Maria Williams
Date: 10/11/2017 11:08:00 PM
Thanks so much Sunlite, but I wont take credit WW is the genius. I set the challenge and he always shines. Thanks so much for he visit and lovely comment my friend....Maria xx
Date: 10/10/2017 11:59:00 AM
Bravo I loved this and the way it flowed or had beat to it amazing write!
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Maria Williams
Date: 10/11/2017 11:09:00 PM
Thanks so much Brenda, I am so glad that you liked this. Thanks for popping by and the lovely comment, I really appreciate it my friend...Maria xx
Date: 9/28/2017 8:08:00 AM
nice with alluring touch ............magical tone
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Date: 9/29/2017 3:34:00 AM
Thank you Muhammad, I'm so glad that you liked it. Thank you for dropping by....Maria
Date: 9/28/2017 8:05:00 AM
nice
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 9/28/2017 8:08:00 AM
Date: 9/25/2017 11:10:00 PM
Such a mystical and magical poem! And the music is just so mesmerizing. What a scene the words paint in my mind. Another FAV for me. :) And, congrats on POTD.
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Maria Williams
Date: 9/26/2017 7:12:00 AM
Thank you so much Carole, I really appreciate your visit and lovely comments always my friend....Maria xxx
Date: 9/24/2017 2:00:00 PM
Belated congratulations to both co-writers for the p.o.t.d. award! Love is a main ingredient of inspiration, and I like where this theme took you. The accompanying music is beautiful. Regards // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/26/2017 3:16:00 PM
My pleasure, Maria.
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Maria Williams
Date: 9/25/2017 6:06:00 AM
Paul I really appreciated all your helpful advice, and respect your knowledge my friend. Thank you so much for that and stopping by to wish us. I am very grateful, and deeply flattered....Maria
Date: 9/23/2017 4:47:00 PM
I loved the internal rhyme that added to your passionate combined words. Congratulations to both of you on the worthy honor of having this poem chosen as POTD! : )
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Maria Williams
Date: 9/23/2017 10:01:00 PM
Thank you so much Connie both from WW and me...Maria xxx
Date: 9/23/2017 3:01:00 AM
A very touching tale of love within this fabulous poem. I simply love it, Maria. Congrats for the POTD. My warm wishes to both of you.
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Maria Williams
Date: 9/23/2017 6:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Afzal my dear friend. I'm so glad that you loved it. I am most flattered and so will WW...Maria
Date: 9/21/2017 10:35:00 AM
wonderful, Maria Williams and Winged Warrior, congratulations on POTD, Hugs to both ~`*
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Date: 9/21/2017 11:35:00 PM
Thanks so much Eve, both from WW and me. I really appreciate your visit and lovely comments my friend...Maria
Date: 9/21/2017 7:07:00 AM
Maris, congratulations! Poem of the year potential! Stellar! My best to you both, chuck
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Maria Williams
Date: 9/22/2017 7:16:00 AM
Oh wow, wouldnt that be lovely. Thanks so much Chuck for the visit and excellent comment, I really appreciate it...Maria
Date: 9/19/2017 8:31:00 PM
Congrats on POTD!
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Maria Williams
Date: 9/19/2017 8:44:00 PM
Thank you Thvia....Maria
Date: 9/19/2017 4:20:00 PM
Just returning to congratulate you on your POTD..
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Maria Williams
Date: 9/19/2017 8:44:00 PM
Thank you Si....Maria
Date: 9/19/2017 12:48:00 PM
- This is a mystery, Maria - Yesterday I got no comment in my inbox ... zero ! - But the comment appeared today ... yesterday's comment - The first thing I did today was to congratulate you and W.W. with this amazing poem ... but, it's not here - I guess my computer is sick - CONGRATULATIONS well deserved AND MORE ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Maria Williams
Date: 9/19/2017 8:48:00 PM
I understand completely Anne-Lise, their system was doing some strange things yesterday. Two comments of mine ended up on the wrong persons site Lol.Nothing wrong with your computer. Thank you for the congrats, my dear friend, I really appreciate it...Maria xxx
Date: 9/19/2017 12:00:00 PM
Wunnerful, Wunnerful, Wunnerful!! A fav. congratulations.
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Maria Williams
Date: 9/19/2017 8:49:00 PM
Thanks so much for the wunnerful comments Dear Sunlite, I really appreciate it my friend...Maria
Date: 9/19/2017 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD you two! Well done!
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Maria Williams
Date: 9/19/2017 9:05:00 PM
Thanks Dean, I really appreciate your visit and comment my dear friend, and I speak for WW as well....Maria
Date: 9/19/2017 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations Maria & WW on this marvelous work of poetic artistry. The rich vibrant verses were beautifully conceived and expressed. Enjoyed...g
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Maria Williams
Date: 9/19/2017 9:07:00 PM
Thanks so much my dear friend George, I really appreciate your visit and continued support. I'm so glad that you liked this. Thank you from WW and me....Maria xx
Date: 9/19/2017 8:04:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 9/19/2017 9:08:00 PM
Thanks so much Ravi, I really appreciate your visit and comments my friend.....Maria
Date: 9/19/2017 6:47:00 AM
Congrats on POTD.
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Maria Williams
Date: 9/19/2017 6:51:00 AM
Thanks so much Agnes, I really appreciate your visit and comment....Maria and WW
Date: 9/19/2017 2:09:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on POTD!!!...lol...^WW^
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Maria Williams
Date: 9/19/2017 2:13:00 AM
Like they say "right back at you" Lol. Congratulations WW, it really was a pleasure. xx
Date: 9/19/2017 1:45:00 AM
Outstanding once again! Well done on POTD
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Maria Williams
Date: 9/19/2017 2:14:00 AM
Thanks White Wolf, I really do appreciate your visit and lovely comment....Maria
Date: 9/18/2017 8:11:00 AM
Maria...what do you say to great talent...it runs in your veins...you are very creative and uniquely intuitive my friend...must be that down under stuff lol...to our next collab!...god bless...^WW^
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Maria Williams
Date: 9/18/2017 8:22:00 AM
Lol you funny man, the pleasure was all mine. Must be those Vegemite sandwiches, and your Canadian Pizza do you think? Thank you for the nice compliments. You are a truly amazing poet WW. Till we write again God Bless ..Maria
Date: 9/18/2017 8:09:00 AM
Certainly this poem about love is a product of love written by two wonderful persons and poets with golden hearts! Congratulations to both dear Maria and dear WW for going beyond the trivial conception of love and more into the mystical and to the wondrous!
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Maria Williams
Date: 9/18/2017 8:16:00 AM
My dearest Demetrios, thank you my dearest friend. That you took the time to visit and comment is overwhelming for me, that you think this poem is wondrous brings great joy to me and I'm sure WW as well. Thank you my dearest Guru of Love...Maria xxx
Date: 9/18/2017 5:27:00 AM
An excellent collaboration by two amazing poets.. Love is an enigma, we all feel it, we all have it and we all lose it... Great rendition of the stages in your poem, you cant tell who wrote which parts and that is the key ingredient to an excellent collab
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Maria Williams
Date: 9/18/2017 6:26:00 AM
So glad that you think so Si, and coming from an amazing poet like yourself, I am very flattered, and I'm sure so will WW. Thanks for the visit and I really do appreciate the support that you've always shown... Maria
Date: 9/18/2017 4:10:00 AM
Wow, this is spectacular, what a remarkable write my friends! Both of you did an excellent job with this collaboration! I surely loved reading this stunning poem this morning! What an exemplary piece of art! Great Work!!
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Maria Williams
Date: 9/18/2017 6:21:00 AM
Thanks so much Russell, I am so glad that you liked this. I loved working with WW on it. The man thinks in poetry I think, he truly is an amazing poet. Thanks Russell for your visit and lovely comment...Maria