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This Sad Winter Day

~ My heart is in pieces, the fog still resides I can’t find my smile, don’t know where it hides This day is so lonely, it’s dark in the sun And puddles of worry have only begun For after just thinking and wishing instead I wish I could take back that thing that I said But, I’ll just keep walking along as I say I really am sorry this sad winter day ~

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/15/2020 2:26:00 PM

'Puddles of worry' hits the spot. In India, I believe they refer to theses as 'poodles of curry.' Smiles, Gershon

Chris Green
Date: 1/15/2020 2:27:00 PM

Ha, that was funny. That sounds like a poem to me...go for it GW, :) Thanks my friend.

Susan Woodrow

Date: 1/15/2020 11:32:00 AM

what could you say that was so bad? I bet it wasn't half as bad as what I've heard said to me...and sometimes, keeping silent is worse... hope it all ends well :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/15/2020 11:37:00 AM

Hey, you know us guys, sometimes we are just plain stupid, not fancy stupid...plain stupid. There is a difference. Thank you so much Susan.

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/15/2020 10:16:00 AM

wow...one can feel the emotions in this one... hope this is fiction but if not, hope the fog lifts and you find your smile again soon...hugs

Chris Green
Date: 1/15/2020 10:27:00 AM

I wish it was fiction, I wish this entire day was fiction but...Thank you so very much Sandy for always leaving such kind words for me.

John Hamilton

Date: 1/15/2020 9:15:00 AM

So nice this is Chris, touches the heart, winter does bring around the blues, we have to fight it, hope this is just a write!

Chris Green
Date: 1/15/2020 9:30:00 AM

Thanks so much my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/15/2020 7:58:00 AM

Some days are heart-rending but there is the sun! Be blessed, dear poet!

Chris Green
Date: 1/15/2020 9:30:00 AM

Thank you Kim.

Peter Rees

Date: 1/15/2020 7:50:00 AM

For a caring soul, regret can be relentless and overwhelming. I hope your sad winter day gets better in the sun.

Chris Green
Date: 1/15/2020 9:30:00 AM

Thank you so much Peter

John Lawless

Date: 1/15/2020 7:47:00 AM

Ouch

Chris Green
Date: 1/15/2020 9:29:00 AM

Yep, definitely painful.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/15/2020 7:30:00 AM

Hi Chris. Well expressed. I am sorry to hear about your sad winter day. I don't feel well either today. I hope your apology reaches who it may be intended for, if so. Take care my friend. I hope you have a better day :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/15/2020 9:29:00 AM

Thank you so very much Heidi.