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This Rainy Night I hear that sound; raindrops racing on my rooftop, out of sight. Thunder, lightning I'll be facing this dark rainy night. The moon is hiding, so no light but for that which I am bracing; electric bolts that stir deep fright. Comfort is my quilt, embracing. Wake me soon to morning bright; sunny day at last erasing this dark rainy night. Sandra M. Haight ~3rd Place~ Contest: Form R Sponsor: Broken Wings Judged: 07/15/2017

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Date: 1/12/2018 4:11:00 PM
Love the imagery, Sandra, enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 8/9/2017 8:28:00 AM
Genius poetry. I'm catching up with your poems
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Date: 7/17/2017 4:23:00 PM
Excellent example of roundel, Sandra. You make it look effortless. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 7/1/2017 7:16:00 AM
Great poem, Sandra, love the form you've chosen, never tried it before, you have written beautifully:)
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Date: 6/30/2017 5:03:00 AM
I love rainy nights...and you're gif...best of luck Sandra...great Roundel...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 6/29/2017 2:09:00 PM
Great use of form Sandra. best wishes...
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Date: 6/29/2017 1:34:00 PM
Very well done Sandra. It brings us right through it :)
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Date: 6/29/2017 11:40:00 AM
You never disappoint, Mrs Sandra. I may have to try this form. I have read some really good poetry this morning written in this form This is right up there with the best of them:) I love a good rain storm. This is wonderful:)
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Date: 6/29/2017 10:48:00 AM
Fabulous imagery and I love the gif Sandra. I have never tried this form and your descriptive poem has inspired me to try:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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