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This Quietus - Death

This quietus death – sweet release- a rhapsody enwrapping you. Fathomless it is; pain will cease. This quietus death – sweet release! Your story does not end, for peace lasts an eternity when life's through! This quietus death – sweet release- a rhapsody enwrapping you. March 24, 2018 for Broken Wing's "5 Words Please" Contest

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Marc Acrich

Date: 4/23/2018 2:41:00 PM

So you are in 18th place, not sure how this works, you are sucjh a good poet

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/21/2018 6:31:00 PM

Hello Andrea, even though i read this poem, I did not understand it. Sorry. Have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/23/2018 2:39:00 PM

Oh... that does make sense to me. Because I do believe in the after life. I am hoping for the same thing . Have a nice day my friend.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/21/2018 8:19:00 PM

There is life after death and it will bring peace from all the madness we see here on earth. That is what I am hoping anyway.

Robert Johnson

Date: 4/20/2018 8:20:00 PM

You captured the absoluteness of the moment here Andrea. We live and live and live, and then, bam, done. What we didn't even know we wanted, enwraps us.

James Inman

Date: 4/14/2018 8:33:00 AM

A morose tone to a beautifully written poem with a lovely positive message (perhaps it is I who is morose and not your poem).

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/10/2018 4:55:00 PM

A beautiful poem where your choice of form contributes to a lovely haunting effect. Lovely, Andrea.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/5/2018 3:16:00 AM

Very powerful Andrea. Congratulations on your win. Kai

Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2018 3:14:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned Triolet, of course you know I write of death often and appreciate such poems . .

Fj Thomas

Date: 3/29/2018 5:45:00 PM

Oh Andy a stunning Triolet!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 3/28/2018 10:51:00 AM

I AM STUNNED WITH DISBELIEF - WHAT ARE THE ODDS THAT WE WOULD BOTH WRITE A TRIOLET? I posted mine yesterday with absolutely no idea you had used the form as well. Great minds really do lay in the same gutter. This fact blows me away, and the poem is substantive within the form restrictions. Wow - on the poem and the same form thing. Love ... CayCay

John Gondolf

Date: 3/26/2018 1:53:00 PM

Andrea, you write Triolets so beautifully, they are a joy to read. I should try another. Best of luck in the contest. John

Silent One

Date: 3/26/2018 6:16:00 AM

Great entry for the contest, a deep poem..

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/26/2018 2:08:00 AM

Excellent. Words are used very cleverly and beautifully. All the best for the contest. Enjoyed reading it.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/25/2018 5:23:00 PM

finer than fine as i got so immersed in your poetic mood, andie... i owe you a long soupie... till soon!.. huggs

Carole Duet

Date: 3/25/2018 4:50:00 PM

I love this, Andrea. You made death sound so peaceful.

Chris Hagy

Date: 3/25/2018 3:52:00 PM

I think "breath- taking" perfectly describes this Andrea :) A beautifully sculpted write! :)

Marc Acrich

Date: 3/25/2018 11:18:00 AM

(: I will leave a smile not too much blah blah This is so you know I read it

Kenisha Shines

Date: 3/25/2018 10:55:00 AM

very beautifully written :) all the best for contest

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/25/2018 1:47:00 AM

In your element again, Andrea, an effortless piece, love it. Good luck in the contest. Viv x

John Lawless

Date: 3/24/2018 11:17:00 PM

Ah, the Triolet Temptress strikes again....making it look so easy....the muse muses....I must try one...Great job Andrea.

Matthew Anish

Date: 3/24/2018 8:47:00 PM

Rabbi Abraham Joshua Heschel said that for the pious man it is a privilege to die - just returning the gift that is given to you. Also your fine poem reminds me of a Moody Blues song where the singer sings Life's yours for the making - eternity's waiting, waiting. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 3/24/2018 6:50:00 PM

I don't know about triolet, I'm steeped in the meaning. So encouraging as one is older.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/24/2018 5:57:00 PM

Expertly done..in just a few lines, you incorporated the words seamlessly..a winning entry..well written, Andrea.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/24/2018 5:40:00 PM

what a clever way to use the required words Andrea. i'm not a great triolet fan but this is very well written:-) hugs jan xx