This Old Barn

It has stood for decades along the county gravel road.
Skittering mice and barn owls now call it their abode.

What was once a stately building is now a shambles,
Surrounded by barren fields and prickly brambles.

Where once its weather-boarding was a bright cherry-red,
Due to the ravages of time, they're now a silvered-gray instead.

Yet can be seen a faded Mail Pouch Tobacco sign on its weathered side,
And a rusty weather-vane twisting in the wind, though a bit cockeyed!

Seasons of howling gales have striven to raze its sturdy oaken beams,
But they've held the old barn together though straining at its seams.

Its cavernous lofts once abounded with fragrant alfalfa hay,
That provided children a playground on many a rainy day.

It sheltered horses, sheep and cattle on frigid winter nights,
And for lack of electricity, it was lit by flickering lantern lights.

It was built when neighbors helped neighbors who were skilled,
At wielding hammer and saw and cherished great pride in their guild.

(The old barn of which I speak still stands on Indiana's Farmers' Pike,
Where I spent many happy times as an unassuming Hoosier tyke!)

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired

Was Selected as Poem Of The Day by Soup 26 July 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/16/2018 8:15:00 PM
G'day Bob ... I have a Julie Dant DVD of photos of derelict and aged buildings of Indiana. Your poem reminds me of some of them - thank you Bob - Lindsay
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Date: 8/8/2016 4:18:00 PM
Another wonderful verbal painting, Robert! Here in New England we too have our old barns, though fewer and fewer each year. Your poem brought back many memories. Thanks for posting it. / M
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Date: 7/26/2016 5:41:00 PM
This is an absolutely beautiful write...I have worked with horses in barns for 20 years, and you captured my read with your ode to this old barn... Congrats:)
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Date: 7/26/2016 5:21:00 PM
Congrats on your Old Barn being chosen as Poem Of The Day..I enjoyed reading it..I know that is a precious memory for you..Sara
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Date: 7/26/2016 4:12:00 PM
Great nostalgic read Bob. Really enjoyed it. Reminds me of playing in the loft of my uncle's old barn. Still had outhouses and an old outside well back then. It was the greatest time to be a kid. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 7/26/2016 2:18:00 PM
- Enjoy reading your stories dear Bob, really nice it was the day poems ... congrats - Wonderful written - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 7/26/2016 4:32:00 PM
Thank you, dear Anne-Lise. Long time no hear from you - hope all is well - glad you enjoyed the poem - bob
Date: 7/26/2016 2:15:00 PM
Such vivid imagery Bob I can picture the scenes in my minds eye. Congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/26/2016 1:25:00 PM
Funny how things change over time including our perceptions and memories. Great poem and congrats on POTD.
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Date: 7/26/2016 11:32:00 AM
congrats on your POTD win, robert... this is a sentimental, savory write so different from your usual humorous lines!..huggs
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Date: 7/26/2016 11:20:00 AM
The scene is repeated over and over here in Ontario as family farms are abandoned. Realistic word pictures transport us to a simpler time! Congrats on POTD!
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 7/26/2016 11:24:00 AM
John, thx so much for your kind comments and best to you as you continue your poetical journey - bob h
Date: 7/26/2016 10:21:00 AM
Loved the poem Robert.congrats on POTD!
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Date: 7/26/2016 6:34:00 AM
Congrats on being featured as poem of the day! I love the descriptions in your write, it made me feel like I was there too.
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Date: 7/26/2016 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations Bob, a well deserved POTD honor...
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Date: 7/25/2016 12:32:00 PM
I love your poem Bob. My daddy was a Hoosier tyke also, which I have probably told you before. I just lost my last sibling and realized that my happy memories are mine alone, no one to share them. but I am doing fine Thank you for your comments. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/25/2016 10:46:00 AM
Beautifully descriptive, Bob. I could see it as I read. Barry
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Date: 7/24/2016 9:11:00 PM
Really enjoyed reading this one.
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Date: 7/24/2016 7:15:00 PM
Wonderful imagery. Onto my favorites list. I could picture he chaff dust in the sunlight shafts and spider webs hanging from the beams. Hugs, Suz
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Date: 7/24/2016 4:42:00 PM
Good craftsmanship and neighbors lead to good memories and a sturdy foundation...Terrific write Bob
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