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This Land Is My Land

Snow, snow, drifting down on little towns and farms, Snow, snow glistens on the oaks’ and maples’ arms. River, river from the north, with thaw of ice it flows, Mighty Mississippi, past my little hometown goes. Blooms, blooms, pretty blooms, and lilacs scent the air. Blooms, blooms paint the land beneath a rainbow fair. Hills, hills, soft and rolling, low and grassy mounds, Hills, hills, some are ancient natives’ burial grounds. Stars, stars, flitting stars that wink in twilight skies, Stars, stars, tiny stars are summer’s fireflies! Corn, corn, fields of corn, so wide and green and high. Corn, corn, stalks of corn keep reaching to the sky. Leaves, leaves dance on streets while children walk to school, Leaves that tango, red and gold, as days and nights grow cool. Home, home, harvest home, where crops are gathered in, Home sweet home, as I recall, is hearth of kith and kin. (Can you guess my home state? It's Iowa) By Andrea Dietrich For Skat's MY LAND IS MY HOME Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/14/2012 5:45:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Skat's "My Land Is My Home" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/11/2012 6:16:00 PM
Iowa...cool. Beautiful imagery! Congrats!
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Date: 6/11/2012 3:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win SKATS contest!!!!
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Date: 6/11/2012 1:55:00 PM
Sounds as if this one could be put to music. Such a homey feeling you have given this! Congrats, Andrea!!
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Date: 6/11/2012 1:33:00 PM
ANDREA, congrats with your beautiful FROM the heart poem about your home and land~, xox* PD
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Date: 4/1/2011 8:15:00 AM
Iowa was your home sweet home once,I know it!Beautiful poem--kash
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Date: 8/2/2010 9:54:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your win John in ^Rick Parise's contest "I Applaud You". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2010 12:53:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your place, looks like we were on the bottom floor again. Smile. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/31/2010 9:44:00 PM
I visited my nephew in Iowa a few summers ago. It is lovely country. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/31/2010 8:19:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your winning poem in Rick's contest with this terrific write on Iowa and all it entails.. its beauty and homeland for u.. enjoy another victory today my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 7/31/2010 7:45:00 PM
Congrats to you Andrea, very nice write, Lovely~a 10th place win!!!~HURRAY~God bless you ~Rick
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Date: 7/31/2010 7:41:00 PM
Congrats on the 10th place win, Andrea
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Date: 7/29/2010 12:14:00 AM
Like the kyrielle flavours Andrea.rgds Brian
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Date: 7/24/2010 7:55:00 AM
Pretty well penned tribute to your state, Andrea! I guess that nearly everyone is a fan of his/her state!! I have change too many times to say that I do love my homeland though! Thank you for your kind comments and have a grat Sunday! Best of luck in Rick's contest!....Love, Gert
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Date: 7/23/2010 11:38:00 AM
Gosh, it sounds so beautiful your Iowa ~ and thanks for the blog comment on my poetry ~
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Date: 7/23/2010 11:17:00 AM
So this is Iowa. I was born in Nebraska - am a big Nebraska fan. Go Huskers! Then I moved to Denver - Go Pioneers! (Denver Universities name) Now I live in Meeshigan - Go Blue! After knowing you, dear Andrea, I say, "Go Utes!" or is it Redskins?
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Date: 7/23/2010 10:24:00 AM
good luck on your poem I enjoyed reading it c: and I don't pefer slam that was just the second I wrote so far, I was just getting it to it lol, thanks for your comments :D
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Date: 7/23/2010 4:06:00 AM
Words, words, how they paint a picture from your past. Words, words, so lyrical, make a smile to last. LOVED IT!!!! :) I couldn't help but smile whilst reading this, right from your first couplet. The repetition is superb, really makes for a memorable read, and a lasting smile. Really hope this one wins first place ~ Sharon :) (still smiling)
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Date: 7/23/2010 2:44:00 AM
Your words paint beautiful pictures of the seasons. The title is seductive.
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Date: 7/23/2010 1:20:00 AM
Hi Andrea! I think your title sure is very fitting--- can't help but recall these words and just hear them in my mind-- they're like a lyric or something-- your use of repetition here is very effective-- really enjoyed this one! way to go & applause for this one! Hope this wins big! -- nikko :)
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Date: 7/22/2010 7:26:00 PM
Sounds like heaven to me! I wanna go! You're welcomed to visit my first blog Andrea!
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Date: 7/22/2010 6:40:00 PM
Love the rhythm in this and the soft beauty!
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Date: 7/22/2010 6:18:00 PM
This is so filled with the joy of life. I loved reading it and rereading it. Thanks so much for your kind comments. Steve
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Date: 7/22/2010 6:04:00 PM
Very cheery couplet Andrea.. good luck in Rick's awesome contest with this vivid detailed look at your home State.. enjoyed my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 7/22/2010 7:30:00 AM
love it Andrea, hey thanks for the comment ,,from a while ago,..p.d.
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