This Land Is My Land

Snow, snow, drifting down on little towns and farms, Snow, snow glistens on the oaks’ and maples’ arms. River, river from the north, with thaw of ice it flows, Mighty Mississippi, past my little hometown goes. Blooms, blooms, pretty blooms, and lilacs scent the air. Blooms, blooms paint the land beneath a rainbow fair. Hills, hills, soft and rolling, low and grassy mounds, Hills, hills, some are ancient natives’ burial grounds. Stars, stars, flitting stars that wink in twilight skies, Stars, stars, tiny stars are summer’s fireflies! Corn, corn, fields of corn, so wide and green and high. Corn, corn, stalks of corn keep reaching to the sky. Leaves, leaves dance on streets while children walk to school, Leaves that tango, red and gold, as days and nights grow cool. Home, home, harvest home, where crops are gathered in, Home sweet home, as I recall, is hearth of kith and kin. (Can you guess my home state? It's Iowa) By Andrea Dietrich For Skat's MY LAND IS MY HOME Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 5:45 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Skat's "My Land Is My Home" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Hunter Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 6:16 PM
Iowa...cool. Beautiful imagery! Congrats!
The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 3:31 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win SKATS contest!!!!
Richards Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 1:55 PM
Sounds as if this one could be put to music. Such a homey feeling you have given this! Congrats, Andrea!!
A   Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 1:33 PM
ANDREA, congrats with your beautiful FROM the heart poem about your home and land~, xox* PD
Poet Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 8:15 AM
Iowa was your home sweet home once,I know it!Beautiful poem--kash
Brown Avatar
August 2, 2010 at 9:54 AM
Congratulations to you on your win John in ^Rick Parise's contest "I Applaud You". Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 12:53 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your place, looks like we were on the bottom floor again. Smile. Agape, Moses
Johnson Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 9:44 PM
I visited my nephew in Iowa a few summers ago. It is lovely country. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 8:19 PM
Congrats Andrea on your winning poem in Rick's contest with this terrific write on Iowa and all it entails.. its beauty and homeland for u.. enjoy another victory today my friend.. with luv..
Mehta Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 7:41 PM
Congrats on the 10th place win, Andrea
Strand Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 12:14 AM
Like the kyrielle flavours Andrea.rgds Brian
Knop Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 7:55 AM
Pretty well penned tribute to your state, Andrea! I guess that nearly everyone is a fan of his/her state!! I have change too many times to say that I do love my homeland though! Thank you for your kind comments and have a grat Sunday! Best of luck in Rick's contest!....Love, Gert
La France Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 11:38 AM
Gosh, it sounds so beautiful your Iowa ~ and thanks for the blog comment on my poetry ~
Austin Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 11:17 AM
So this is Iowa. I was born in Nebraska - am a big Nebraska fan. Go Huskers! Then I moved to Denver - Go Pioneers! (Denver Universities name) Now I live in Meeshigan - Go Blue! After knowing you, dear Andrea, I say, "Go Utes!" or is it Redskins?
Arteaga Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 10:24 AM
good luck on your poem I enjoyed reading it c: and I don't pefer slam that was just the second I wrote so far, I was just getting it to it lol, thanks for your comments :D
Tideswell Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 4:06 AM
Words, words, how they paint a picture from your past. Words, words, so lyrical, make a smile to last. LOVED IT!!!! :) I couldn't help but smile whilst reading this, right from your first couplet. The repetition is superb, really makes for a memorable read, and a lasting smile. Really hope this one wins first place ~ Sharon :) (still smiling)
Brown Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 2:44 AM
Your words paint beautiful pictures of the seasons. The title is seductive.
K. Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 1:20 AM
Hi Andrea! I think your title sure is very fitting--- can't help but recall these words and just hear them in my mind-- they're like a lyric or something-- your use of repetition here is very effective-- really enjoyed this one! way to go & applause for this one! Hope this wins big! -- nikko :)
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July 22, 2010 at 7:26 PM
Sounds like heaven to me! I wanna go! You're welcomed to visit my first blog Andrea!
Byrne Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 6:40 PM
Love the rhythm in this and the soft beauty!
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July 22, 2010 at 6:18 PM
This is so filled with the joy of life. I loved reading it and rereading it. Thanks so much for your kind comments. Steve
Sweetheart Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 6:04 PM
Very cheery couplet Andrea.. good luck in Rick's awesome contest with this vivid detailed look at your home State.. enjoyed my friend.. with luv..
A   Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 7:30 AM
love it Andrea, hey thanks for the comment ,,from a while ago,..p.d.
Galua Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 12:14 AM
It's really nice to live....thanks for sharing...lovely piece Andrea...^_^ v
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