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Written 22 March 2025

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“There is no loyalty greater than the love of a loyal dog.” By Author ************************************************************** This is What I call Loyal Love If man can measure loyalty And gauge devoted love for man Then the yardstick was my Roxy, Even more loyal than a friend; Mothered like babes since childhood days Raised in splendour like a princess She had learnt to grasp human ways, Their joys, their sorrows and distress; Each of her wag brightened the heart Like sparks of the sunshine of spring, From her eyes, loyalty would dart From her pat devotion would cling; She was ever first to welcome The master with her wagging tail, Her leaps and embrace so awesome And her waltz lovely without fail; Whether in the shine of the day Or in the grim darkness of night Like soldier she would guard the way With loyalty ever so bright; A companion for garden walks She would sniff all along the place Grasping whatever I would talk As she strolled by my side with grace; She would share the master`s sad ply By lying straight in from of him And staring at him in the eyes With her eyes with tears close to brim. When fate`s hand was close by her side After fourteen long lengthy years She opted for her kennel`s pride Than inside the home to shed tears; Though meted out a surgery With thirty stiTches without cry She was beyond recovery And passed away without a sigh; Her funeral, a sheer glory, And her grave on a high-pitched land Was a match to her loyalty Glimmering brighter than a man. Gone she`s with the family`s heart Like a jar shattered in fragments Like a piece of rag torn apart, Such to her was our attachment; Let fidelity be your name So dedicated was your love, Ever adored would be your fame With your loyalty miles above.

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Date: 3/23/2025 5:08:00 PM
Oh, my mind feels to numb to comment ... I felt this Beautifully penned, tear-rendering write. Not only was it emotional for me, but personal because of the love I still hold for a light faced shepherd I loved and was loved by 40 years ago. Caesar still holds my heart strings, brings me love thru memories and mind images of him. Thank you for bringing him to me right now via your poem ... CayCay
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 3/23/2025 11:41:00 PM
Our Roxy left us about one year back and so afflicted has been the family, particularly my spouse, that we do nat have the heart to raise another one so soon.
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 3/23/2025 11:40:00 PM
Thank you a lot dear poet for appreciating so highly the write. I share your deep feelings at the loss of your light faced shepherd years back. This breed of pets are so friendly, faithful, playful, understanding .... that they keep you amazing day after day and when they depart they rend your heart apart.
Date: 3/23/2025 11:44:00 AM
Hello Guptar, sorry for your loss of your pet dog. it is hard when we lose a pet after all they are family to. i know your heart aches. i know you miss her. I feel the same because of the loss my cat. Remember the good time. Blessings my friend. /Darlene//
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