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This Is My Shadow (Cleave Poem)

This Is My Shadow Poetry is my escape - and my cure I float - in word like free bird soaring - swiftly into the blue sky; freedom is not - found in what you can offer - me but in what I can do - for my self, without you vacuuming - my whole Oh, my shadow - can only be seen by those who are willing to see - me -- The cleave is three poems in one and was created by Dr. Phuoc Tan Diep, poet and artist. To learn more about this poetic form, visit the link below http://cleavepoetry.wordpress.com/

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Date: 2/5/2009 6:15:00 PM
Ernesto - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/3/2009 4:22:00 PM
Very unique! It has a wonderful flow. I especially love "Poetry is my escape - and my cure" - beautiful line. Congrats on being featured this week! :) Blessings... Amy
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Date: 2/3/2009 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/3/2009 8:25:00 AM
Ernesto, this poem is amazing! I've never seen this form of poem before! You did an amazing job with it also! Well deserved feature with this one! Congratulations! Trudy
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Date: 2/2/2009 8:24:00 PM
Very intriguing and creative, Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week.God Bless*Tyesha
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Date: 2/2/2009 1:34:00 PM
Awesome! This poem flows so beautifully. I love when you can dive into reading a poem and for get that your reading poetry. Brilliant!
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Date: 2/2/2009 10:25:00 AM
Well, THIS IS just incredible ... smile ... found two of the poems but I guess I'll have to go check out the other site to read the 3rd. Beyond clever its beautiful Ernesto!! A very well-deserved feature this week. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/2/2009 9:19:00 AM
Congrats Erneston on your cleave poem "This is My Shadow" being featured this week. Vince
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Date: 2/2/2009 12:48:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Ernesto.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/1/2009 11:20:00 AM
Ernesto ~ Freedom ! Reminds me of my very next excursion, towards Bottom Road ~ which is my escape, along the bend of the Missouri River between Nebraska & South Dakota, another AWAY place for me! How have you been! Waiting to hear about our publishing arrangement. Please write! Paula Larson
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Date: 2/1/2009 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations Ernesto on a most creative featured write of the week! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/14/2008 4:52:00 PM
Very interesting..ive never seen this before. Nice one..thanks for letting us see this form . BG
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