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This Hour - Us Be

'the soar us'...see... these-hours-as 'this art t's us'...to... escape 'thee sour-rush'...of... the-sore-us caught in 'this hours rush'...for... they-are-us...all as these-oars-are-us...so... sew...be it stan sand

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The Situation

Date: 10/1/2023 4:28:00 PM

I'm still questioning?

Sand Blown
Date: 10/5/2023 7:37:00 PM

most words today originated with old metaphors with various meanings....so a thesaurus be a 'this are us', or 'this hour...us' be as 'thee soar us' ....stan : )

Di11y Da11y

Date: 9/25/2023 1:54:00 AM

Like the gentle rush of the wind which explains being a poet

Sand Blown
Date: 10/5/2023 7:31:00 PM

...ah yes....just....a breeze......stan