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*Just needed a moment to vent ...lol

Ok, this has to stop I have been sneezing with this cold for a month So many boxes of Kleenex, I have lost count Congestion, cough, nose running away I’ve tried everything, vitamins, fruit, tea, honey I keep thinking it will be gone, in a new day No such luck, the cold or whatever carries on Now, I am getting really fed up My old fractured nose, is not feeling so well I haven’t had a cold in years, but it seems This one is making up for it and could last a year! --- This has to stop --- *By the way, if you see my nose running by, Please catch it, thanks :) Heidi Sands 8/15/17

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Janis Thompson

Date: 8/23/2017 2:30:00 PM

I haven't seen it yet. Will look out. Very cleverly composed.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/23/2017 2:40:00 PM

Thanks Janis!! :) They are now saying it has turned into allergies. Nose still on the run!

Pete Yuhas

Date: 8/16/2017 3:13:00 PM

I think the nose always knows best, but who really (knows noses) ? Have a better day. Blessings

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/16/2017 3:27:00 PM

Thanks Pete! :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/16/2017 5:03:00 AM

Ouch, that cold sounds terrible! I haven't been sick in a long time, at least not that sick, (knock on wood)! I'm sorry that you are having a hard time getting over this cold, I hope that you can get better soon, and to enjoy the Fall that is coming up! Oh, watch out for that ragweed however! Great Work on your poem!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/16/2017 3:27:00 PM

Yes Russell, this is a powerful long one. I haven't had one in so long, but also not quite like this. Thank you for your comment :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/15/2017 6:50:00 PM

Hope you feel better soon Heidi...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/15/2017 3:53:00 PM

A cute (sick?) poem, Heidi. Do hope you are feeling better. Hang in there, it will pass in due time. Love always.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/15/2017 3:58:00 PM

Thanks Freddie :)

Dean Wood

Date: 8/15/2017 12:40:00 PM

Ditch the Kleenex for some Puffs brand with lotion in it. Your nose will thank you. Also, if your nose is running through a green swamp its a cold, clear like water, its probably an alergy. Sure hope you get feeling better. -- Dean

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/15/2017 12:48:00 PM

Yes, I have the Kleenex with the lotion. I should be on one of their advertisements lol. Many boxes. Thank you for your advice and best wishes , Dean. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/15/2017 12:17:00 PM

- .... is it red and sore? ... I saw it 10 minutes ago :))) - I had a cold all summer last year ... with pneumonia and sinusitis .... for four months - " I've tried everything, vitamins, fruit, tea, honey "... yes, EVERYTHING! - Get well soon, Heidi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/15/2017 12:26:00 PM

Yes Sunshine! That would be it! Oh my word, that cold you had all summer last year sounds awful and pneumonia and sinusitis too. 4 months? ugh! Thank you for your visit to this one and best wishes :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/15/2017 12:13:00 PM

I agree--it has gone on long enough. Good humor. Feel better soon, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/15/2017 12:25:00 PM

Thank you Vijay :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/15/2017 12:11:00 PM

Awe, mine aggravates me in the spring. I feel your pain and I promise I'll use a net to catch it if it runs by me. Lol! Feel better Miss Heidi! xoxo

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/15/2017 12:25:00 PM

LOL Thank you Akkina for your offer to use the net and the nice comment :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/15/2017 12:01:00 PM

Heidi, I hate colds too!! I hope you feel better soon, Try some red wine ( for medicinal purposes)

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/15/2017 12:04:00 PM

Me too Mike! I am getting really fed up with this one now! I don't drink wine, and haven't had a drink in quite a while, but was just talking to a friend of mine about considering having one ...for this lol. Thank you for the visit and best wishes. :)