This Girl Who Is Me

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Written, February 15, 2024

Poetry/Free Verse/This Girl Who Is Me
Copyright Protected, ID 02-1623-635-15
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

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I look at the girl in the picture frame she is me, some odd year ago I wish that I could find her again she looks tranquil leaning on that dappled tree in summer hues her eyes piercing me so much depth buried within so much pain yet, she has a calm beautiful aura this girl who is me

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/15/2024 4:36:00 PM

I can identify with your words. Although I've not had the tragedy you've had, I've had a challenging life--one that very few know about...so when I look at pictures of the younger me, I see the calm, patient girl with hope in her eyes...some of that hope and trust was squelched years ago. Am faving this probably because I identify with it. Have a splendid evening, hugs, Sara

Constance La France
Date: 2/16/2024 11:12:00 AM

Sara, thank you for the comment, for sharing and for the FAV, hugs, Constance