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This Feeling Has No Where To Go

The collapsing in of an emotion The house of cards falls Here is the beginning, there is the end But mid ground failure There's no awards for that Little old dominoes could tell you A miss, is a miss

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Timothy Ray

Date: 5/19/2023 6:22:00 PM

exactly....i hear the theme and know this canoe....i liked this one

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/20/2023 12:57:00 AM

Thank you, I took a look at your poetry, you are very talented. Thank you for your encouragement, it is much appreciated

Timothy Ray
Date: 5/19/2023 10:11:00 PM

as i said Dilly you have great insight....and as a fellow Wordsmith always keep these close as you grow deeper and deeper into you....they have taught how the path brought me to today....may your quill continue on

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/19/2023 9:50:00 PM

Thank you