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This Bunny Can Bang All Night For Anil Deo

Poor Energiser bunny was slow 
For his battery charge had gone low 
He relaxed on a barge
Got a solar recharge
Now he’s able to drum a solo


thanks to Anil for the Inspiration and to my hubby for helping with the title and line 4

04~14~17

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2017

humoroustechnologylimerick

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April 17, 2017 at 9:59 AM

Good Morning Jan. The title caught my eye for I have such respect for Anil. I loved your theme and the energiser bunny. Well done in theme and format. Well done

April 18, 2017 at 1:27 PM

Thanks so much Lisa:-) I think Anil admires the work of us both:-) hugs jan xx

April 16, 2017 at 1:32 PM

LOL, I'm still chuckling picturing this - happy Easter xx

April 16, 2017 at 1:36 PM

Cheers Jack:-) hugs Jan xx

April 16, 2017 at 8:25 AM

Wow, Superb. very nice and rich concept. A7................//hugs

April 16, 2017 at 9:18 AM

Thanks Manmath:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

April 15, 2017 at 5:10 PM

oh, SO CUTE!!!

April 15, 2017 at 5:13 PM

I don't need much encouragement to write limericks lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 15, 2017 at 12:13 PM

Hoppy hoppy joy joy! ;) xomo!

April 15, 2017 at 12:55 PM

lol Maureen Happy Easter to you hugs Jan xx

April 15, 2017 at 11:07 AM

Hi Jan, Lol! No one does a limerick like you. This is hilarious:-) Alexis

April 15, 2017 at 11:34 AM

I think I have found my forte with the limerick form and it is in my genes as both my aunt and uncle wrote limericks so I guess it was bound to show when I began writing in 2013:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

April 15, 2017 at 10:22 AM

This is fantastic Jan! Very clever. I have always loved those energizer bunny commercials. 7 : ) Happy Easter!

April 15, 2017 at 11:32 AM

I was challenged to write the poem by Anil Deo and now both he and Ray Gridley have posted poems relating to mine - I absolutely love Ray's I wish i had written it myself!:-) hugs Jan xx

April 15, 2017 at 9:59 AM

Great limerick again, Jan:) good one:)

April 15, 2017 at 11:31 AM

Thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

April 14, 2017 at 5:28 PM

I love a good Limerick! and this is good. Regards, Craig

April 14, 2017 at 6:06 PM

Thanks Craig :-) hope you aren't burying your head in the sand with that name change lol:-) hugs Jan xx

April 14, 2017 at 5:00 PM

A cool banging bunny..nice limerick Jan

April 14, 2017 at 5:03 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 14, 2017 at 3:11 PM

:))) ... a chuckle bomb again, Jan :)) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

April 14, 2017 at 3:31 PM

Thanks Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan Have a wonderful easter :-)

April 14, 2017 at 9:14 AM

my poet, JM, paid me a visit yep, we all be OK & nothing's illicit our poet from the Isle of Man threads limericks from here to Iceland & pens it like a good woman: such merit. HAPPY EASTER Blessings to U, your Hubby, Mom, & family. You made many folks here enjoy Easter a bit more ... but no more DRUMMING for me until Christmas. I've been naughty, naughty

April 14, 2017 at 11:35 AM

I am sure you haven't been too naughty lol:-) Enjoy Easter and have a wonderful time over the holiday:-) hugs Jan xx

April 14, 2017 at 9:03 AM

thanks for the notoriety, Jan. Which line did your hubby contribute? (Solar? Near enough--Son is Purer Power, LOL). hugs galore

April 14, 2017 at 9:07 AM

Yes hubby came up with solar:-) Thanks so much for the inspiration:-) hugs Jan xx

April 14, 2017 at 8:47 AM

Your poem just keeps going and going and going.... :) Nicely done Jan.

April 14, 2017 at 8:48 AM

LOL Chris:-) I have heard of the Duracell bunny not the engergiser one but Google is a wonderful tool:-) hugs Jan xx

April 14, 2017 at 8:42 AM

Excellent stuff! As I've commented before, you have such a natural gift for humour - especially in this form. I am jealous now, though, that you're writing limericks for other people ;)

April 14, 2017 at 8:48 AM

Thanks John:-) Anil commented on a poem and challenged me to write about the energiser bunny - I get great inspiration from suggestions I get and need to work on a parody of snow white and Cinderella after comments on my 'crapunzel' poem :-) I will be on stage at a poetry review with a group of like minded humourous poets at the end of the month:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

April 14, 2017 at 7:26 AM

Haha..Really enjoyed your limerick this afternoon sweet Jan.

April 14, 2017 at 8:09 AM

Thanks Charma I got challenged by Anil to write a poem about the energiser bunny:-) hugs jan xx

April 14, 2017 at 7:10 AM

Haha...He needs some chocolate too

April 14, 2017 at 7:15 AM

I am sure he needs more than chocolate if hes going all night lol:-) hugs jan xx

April 14, 2017 at 7:06 AM

A great collaboration, Jan. Tell hubby I said so. It's always fun to read your limmies.

April 14, 2017 at 7:08 AM

Aww thanks Lin - he always listens to my poems and advised me if something needs a little work - the line about the solar recharge was brilliant:-) I was challenged by Anil to write a poem on the energiser bunny I hope I have done a good job:-) hugs Jan xx

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