This Bunny Can Bang All Night For Anil Deo

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Poor Energiser bunny was slow For his battery charge had gone low He relaxed on a barge Got a solar recharge Now he’s able to drum a solo thanks to Anil for the Inspiration and to my hubby for helping with the title and line 4 04~14~17

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Date: 4/17/2017 9:59:00 AM
Good Morning Jan. The title caught my eye for I have such respect for Anil. I loved your theme and the energiser bunny. Well done in theme and format. Well done
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Date: 4/18/2017 1:27:00 PM
Thanks so much Lisa:-) I think Anil admires the work of us both:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/16/2017 1:32:00 PM
LOL, I'm still chuckling picturing this - happy Easter xx
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Date: 4/16/2017 1:36:00 PM
Cheers Jack:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/16/2017 8:25:00 AM
Wow, Superb. very nice and rich concept. A7................//hugs
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Date: 4/16/2017 9:18:00 AM
Thanks Manmath:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/15/2017 5:10:00 PM
oh, SO CUTE!!!
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Date: 4/15/2017 5:13:00 PM
I don't need much encouragement to write limericks lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/15/2017 12:13:00 PM
Hoppy hoppy joy joy! ;) xomo!
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Date: 4/15/2017 12:55:00 PM
lol Maureen Happy Easter to you hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/15/2017 11:07:00 AM
Hi Jan, Lol! No one does a limerick like you. This is hilarious:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/15/2017 11:34:00 AM
I think I have found my forte with the limerick form and it is in my genes as both my aunt and uncle wrote limericks so I guess it was bound to show when I began writing in 2013:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/15/2017 10:22:00 AM
This is fantastic Jan! Very clever. I have always loved those energizer bunny commercials. 7 : ) Happy Easter!
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Date: 4/15/2017 11:32:00 AM
I was challenged to write the poem by Anil Deo and now both he and Ray Gridley have posted poems relating to mine - I absolutely love Ray's I wish i had written it myself!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/15/2017 9:59:00 AM
Great limerick again, Jan:) good one:)
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Date: 4/15/2017 11:31:00 AM
Thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/14/2017 5:28:00 PM
I love a good Limerick! and this is good. Regards, Craig
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Date: 4/14/2017 6:06:00 PM
Thanks Craig :-) hope you aren't burying your head in the sand with that name change lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/14/2017 5:00:00 PM
A cool banging bunny..nice limerick Jan
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Date: 4/14/2017 5:03:00 PM
Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/14/2017 3:11:00 PM
:))) ... a chuckle bomb again, Jan :)) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/14/2017 3:31:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan Have a wonderful easter :-)
Date: 4/14/2017 9:14:00 AM
my poet, JM, paid me a visit yep, we all be OK & nothing's illicit our poet from the Isle of Man threads limericks from here to Iceland & pens it like a good woman: such merit. HAPPY EASTER Blessings to U, your Hubby, Mom, & family. You made many folks here enjoy Easter a bit more ... but no more DRUMMING for me until Christmas. I've been naughty, naughty
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Date: 4/14/2017 11:35:00 AM
I am sure you haven't been too naughty lol:-) Enjoy Easter and have a wonderful time over the holiday:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/14/2017 9:03:00 AM
thanks for the notoriety, Jan. Which line did your hubby contribute? (Solar? Near enough--Son is Purer Power, LOL). hugs galore
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Date: 4/14/2017 9:07:00 AM
Yes hubby came up with solar:-) Thanks so much for the inspiration:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/14/2017 8:47:00 AM
Your poem just keeps going and going and going.... :) Nicely done Jan.
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Date: 4/14/2017 8:48:00 AM
LOL Chris:-) I have heard of the Duracell bunny not the engergiser one but Google is a wonderful tool:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/14/2017 8:42:00 AM
Excellent stuff! As I've commented before, you have such a natural gift for humour - especially in this form. I am jealous now, though, that you're writing limericks for other people ;)
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Date: 4/14/2017 8:48:00 AM
Thanks John:-) Anil commented on a poem and challenged me to write about the energiser bunny - I get great inspiration from suggestions I get and need to work on a parody of snow white and Cinderella after comments on my 'crapunzel' poem :-) I will be on stage at a poetry review with a group of like minded humourous poets at the end of the month:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/14/2017 7:26:00 AM
Haha..Really enjoyed your limerick this afternoon sweet Jan.
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Date: 4/14/2017 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Charma I got challenged by Anil to write a poem about the energiser bunny:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/14/2017 7:10:00 AM
Haha...He needs some chocolate too
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Date: 4/14/2017 7:15:00 AM
I am sure he needs more than chocolate if hes going all night lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/14/2017 7:06:00 AM
A great collaboration, Jan. Tell hubby I said so. It's always fun to read your limmies.
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Date: 4/14/2017 7:08:00 AM
Aww thanks Lin - he always listens to my poems and advised me if something needs a little work - the line about the solar recharge was brilliant:-) I was challenged by Anil to write a poem on the energiser bunny I hope I have done a good job:-) hugs Jan xx
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