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This Body I Am

Trapped in what I cannot trust, A vessel flooding with settled assumptions, Bitter tears, and angry eruption This body is not mine, but the world, Trickling in evil trepidation, Smiles of corruption, And frowns of devastation A body that towers over my frame And begs to be understood I may at times cool its waters, And give its restless soul breath to breathe, But I cannot dream to stop the torrent as it seeps through my everything Your eyes, They see so much, Do your visions not soon settle into other minds far from their own Or is this body filled in tepid air of destructive ego, Feeding on my pulsating empathy, Crashing doubt and worry in me? Your passions and intelligence surpass my own, But every tear of inadequacy brings me closer to the truth, Every striking chord you play upon my heart resounds out of my mind and onto my lips Your screams and shouts for attention wrench out the core of me And in you, for you, I give Not once expecting any token in return For whom with our own bodies, our own souls, and our own minds Do we give and give relentlessly? Who in this wide, wide world has not held the planet in shame, Pride of our own being, gripping our world in those anxious palms... I am in you, and before you This body I am, that I will always hold I understand now, Yes, I understand you...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/5/2016 1:30:00 AM
Sorry-Don't know what to say besides Thank you!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/5/2016 3:44:00 AM
Your comment means so much. Thanks for taking the time to read, Jai... <3 ~Laura
Date: 3/2/2016 8:13:00 AM
What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7
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Date: 2/26/2016 4:54:00 PM
We do not always understand ourselves, and it is interesting to know how others look at us. Doubts and inadequacy could prove our undoing, but at the same time they can aid us to learn more about who we really are. ~ Regards // paul
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/26/2016 10:36:00 PM
Love your wisdom here, Paul. You touched up on an important theme of this poem, and that is growth despite the deficiencies of the world and in ourselves. Thank you for the lovely comments. ~Laura
Date: 2/19/2016 9:55:00 PM
The inner turmoil is prevalent in this piece, but the first step to moving forward is to realize your imperfections. Our souls, personalities, etc., are much bigger than our earthly vessels, "A body that towers over my frame" ... your humanity and spirituality shines through in this piece. Well done.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/19/2016 11:06:00 PM
You are quite the poetess yourself, Laura! :) Sometimes my comments can ramble (sometimes not) ... it makes poetry reading a lot more enjoyable for me when I can dig in and try to gain its meanings and its feelings!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/19/2016 11:01:00 PM
Thanks, Timothy. I do appreciate your visits, and you always leave me with interesting thoughts. I have been in love with your poetry. You write amazingly! ~Laura
Date: 2/19/2016 6:47:00 PM
To understand the world is to understand the heart, although this knowedge knows sorrow and pain, happiness and strength is the highest purpose, which your poem of disillusionment becomes, a beautiful awareness your heart gives me Laura. "Do your visions not soon settle into other minds far from their own..." beautiful insight Poetess...J.A.B.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/20/2016 4:02:00 PM
Delightful! I love it when the world brings me to you, stimulating your mind is divine pleasure for me Poetess..J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/19/2016 10:59:00 PM
Thanks for reading, sweetest Justin. (: I always love your insightful words. I was at this bookstore in Old Pasadena for most of the day and I saw Undaunted Courage on the shelf, and I immediately thought of you and your beautiful masterpiece. I decided to buy the book and will be reading it soon! ~Laura
Date: 2/18/2016 12:50:00 PM
you show the other side if the mirror with this absorbing read, laura... very fine!..huggs
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/18/2016 10:17:00 PM
Thank you for reading, dear Nette. I really appreciate your sweetness. ~Laura

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