Thirteen Cracks In the Mirror

THIRTEEN CRACKS IN THE MIRROR

a soul-crushing crack, a wrinkle in my nightmare wake.
crushed velvet hides the splintered wood, that stabs thirteen times.
tears cascade down the entryway mirror - i’m locked inside.
my ethereal heartbeat pounds, trying to get out.

forms bleeding black from head to foot (i despise that color)
languidly see me in my parlor - i don’t get up.
hands touch me, bruised lips kiss me (can’t they all go away)

i wake up in sweat, drowning in my bed (i sit up)
my mind’s eye hears the clock strike thirteen (impossible)
my oval-faced mirror, falls to the floor, ceasing time.

i look down in its pond-like ripples to view my face.
an ancient biddy stares back at me, with thirteen lines.
my inaudible scream, echoes - forever coffered.

Halloween Scare
October 1 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 12:04 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 9:15 AM
Thank you!
Inman Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 11:10 PM
A very creepy other worldly write Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 9:15 AM
Thank you!
Barden Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 10:01 PM
Congratulations on your win, Kim - love the imagery and story - keep up the great writing! :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 9:16 AM
Thank you! I appreciate your encouragement! <3 Kim
Roper Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 3:25 PM
Back to congratulate you, Kim, :) ... Hugs Eve ~`*
Rodrigues Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 5:02 PM
Thank you Eve!
Roper Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 12:17 AM
Well done, Kim, I like the line, " I look down in it's pond-like ripples to view my face. Enjoyed reading
Vaso Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 12:10 AM
Spooky indeed! Great Halloween write!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 5:02 PM
Thanks Arthur!
Pandit Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:18 PM
Thirteen cracks-- a scary omen--then 13 lines to match the emotion--best for a win, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:42 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
One Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 1:38 PM
Oooh this is dark and spooky... gripping write!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 1:51 PM
Thank you, Silent! :)
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