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Thirteen Cracks In the Mirror

THIRTEEN CRACKS IN THE MIRROR a soul-crushing crack, a wrinkle in my nightmare wake. crushed velvet hides the splintered wood, that stabs thirteen times. tears cascade down the entryway mirror - i’m locked inside. my ethereal heartbeat pounds, trying to get out. forms bleeding black from head to foot (i despise that color) languidly see me in my parlor - i don’t get up. hands touch me, bruised lips kiss me (can’t they all go away) i wake up in sweat, drowning in my bed (i sit up) my mind’s eye hears the clock strike thirteen (impossible) my oval-faced mirror, falls to the floor, ceasing time. i look down in its pond-like ripples to view my face. an ancient biddy stares back at me, with thirteen lines. my inaudible scream, echoes - forever coffered. Halloween Scare October 1 2017

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Date: 11/10/2017 12:04:00 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2017 9:15:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 11/9/2017 11:10:00 PM
A very creepy other worldly write Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2017 9:15:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 11/9/2017 10:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Kim - love the imagery and story - keep up the great writing! :-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2017 9:16:00 AM
Thank you! I appreciate your encouragement! <3 Kim
Date: 11/9/2017 3:25:00 PM
Back to congratulate you, Kim, :) ... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2017 5:02:00 PM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 10/2/2017 12:17:00 AM
Well done, Kim, I like the line, " I look down in it's pond-like ripples to view my face. Enjoyed reading
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Date: 10/2/2017 12:10:00 AM
Spooky indeed! Great Halloween write!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2017 5:02:00 PM
Thanks Arthur!
Date: 10/1/2017 2:18:00 PM
Thirteen cracks-- a scary omen--then 13 lines to match the emotion--best for a win, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/1/2017 2:42:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 10/1/2017 1:38:00 PM
Oooh this is dark and spooky... gripping write!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/1/2017 1:51:00 PM
Thank you, Silent! :)

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