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Heatwave

Raindrops splash like burgers spitting grease on grills furtive relief from simmering heat from the daily twirl of white dust Clouds part in snippets, rain battered soon stilled by reserve Blow torch hot summer reigns to make talons of flowerbeds to parch trees to brown sorrow Yet as dusk drifts in, children in clusters hopscotch embracing the burnished glow of pavement Joy that fills the margins of neighborhood streets hot, like tunnels of love Harvested hope that humid air will sift through and vanish in a neon light cool Summer's ledger of appeals an optimist's ease Feeling a rush of relief restorative when the August wind sighs like a bully out of breath Poem composed: July 30, 2020 Second Chance Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 1/19/2023 7:39:00 PM
I love your creative descriptions. In particular, "raindrops splash like burgers spitting grease on grills" and the sigh of the August wind being compared to "a bully out of breath."
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/19/2023 8:32:00 PM
Thank you Juliet. I try to come up with similes + metaphors that aren't too far fetched. The final simile re. the August wind is a recent revision. With appreciation, Brian
Date: 1/19/2023 1:41:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/19/2023 2:45:00 PM
Thank you, Sara, for the stop by + affirmative message. Very thoughtful of you to do so. Cheers Brian
Date: 1/19/2023 6:42:00 AM
I enjoy the images you project here Brian. A break from the norm :) Congratulations on your win! :)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/19/2023 10:42:00 AM
Greetings Linda, Thanks very much for your congratulatory message regarding my posting. Be well. Sincerely Brian
Date: 1/18/2023 8:03:00 AM
Congratulation on your win. Your "Heatwave" is a wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/18/2023 9:18:00 AM
Thanks very much Paula. I appreciate your stop by + congratulatory message. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 7/30/2020 4:02:00 PM
Hello Brian Sambourne, yes I would call that thirsty. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/31/2020 5:10:00 PM
Hello Darlene. I appreciate each and every read and certainly value yours. Be well. Brian
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/31/2020 11:55:00 AM
Hello Bryan Sambourne, Yes i am thank you. I hope that you are keeping well to. I will be reading more of your poetry.Be well my friend. enjoy your day.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/30/2020 4:19:00 PM
Hi Darlene Good to hear from you again. I hope that you are keeping safe + healthy. Thank you for reading my poetry dear lady. Sincerely, Brian

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