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Third Base

Love bites took me to a new place tiny teeth marks I can't erase; Laid back you looked for my entrance, passing third base, passing third base; Hungrily you nipped at my soul, ripped the lace of my camisole; Whispered on my skin 'Keep control.. stay in your role, stay in your role.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/20/2024 6:08:00 AM

Wow! This is haunting! Congrats on POTD!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/19/2024 6:11:00 PM

' passing third base, tiny teeth marks I can't erase. ' Now that's savoring the moment. :) Your thoughts are so sensual and inviting. A very unique way to describe- one entering a new dimension. Congratulations Melani, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy

Melani Udaeta
Date: 8/19/2024 8:11:00 PM

Thank you!!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/19/2024 3:48:00 PM

Congratulations Melanie! A great sensual poem for POTD! :)

Melani Udaeta
Date: 8/19/2024 8:11:00 PM

Thank you!!

Tom Woody

Date: 8/19/2024 1:22:00 PM

I've never tasted soul. Does it taste like chicken? Hey, enjoy your special day

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/19/2024 5:57:00 PM

Smiling at you. :)

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/19/2024 11:05:00 AM

Lusty emotions in play, Paradice by the dashboard light--Holy cow! --doubly blessed. Congratulations on the poem of the day, Melani! ~I Am Anaya

Tom Woody
Date: 8/19/2024 1:21:00 PM

Yep, I got you singing the classics

Melani Udaeta
Date: 8/19/2024 1:02:00 PM

Thank you! Blessings.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/19/2024 8:57:00 AM

I love a poem that gives me goosebumps. Wonderfully evocative skin crawling writing, congratulations on POTD!

Tom Woody
Date: 8/19/2024 1:21:00 PM

I'm goosebumpy

Melani Udaeta
Date: 8/19/2024 1:02:00 PM

Wonderful. I’m so glad. Thank you for your kind words. Blessings.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/19/2024 8:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. Have a blessed/wonderful day with your win................

Melani Udaeta
Date: 8/19/2024 1:03:00 PM

Thank you so much!

Joseph May

Date: 8/19/2024 6:34:00 AM

Very nicely done, Congrats on POTD

Melani Udaeta
Date: 8/19/2024 1:03:00 PM

Thank you! Blessings.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 8/19/2024 4:49:00 AM

Dear Melani, Congratulations on your wonderful poem about desires and restraint, which is so well said. I really enjoyed reading and can see why it deserves the POTD. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Melani Udaeta
Date: 8/19/2024 1:04:00 PM

Thank you!! Blessings.