Third Base

Love bites took me to a new place
 tiny teeth marks I can't erase;
Laid back you looked for my entrance,
 passing third base, passing third base;

Hungrily you nipped at my soul, 
ripped the lace of my camisole;
Whispered on my skin 'Keep control..
stay in your role, stay in your role.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 6:08 AM
Wow! This is haunting! Congrats on POTD!
Nicole Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 6:11 PM
' passing third base, tiny teeth marks I can't erase. ' Now that's savoring the moment. :) Your thoughts are so sensual and inviting. A very unique way to describe- one entering a new dimension. Congratulations Melani, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
Udaeta Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 8:11 PM
Thank you!!
Fowler Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 3:48 PM
Congratulations Melanie! A great sensual poem for POTD! :)
Udaeta Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 8:11 PM
Thank you!!
Anaya Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 11:05 AM
Lusty emotions in play, Paradice by the dashboard light--Holy cow! --doubly blessed. Congratulations on the poem of the day, Melani! ~I Am Anaya
Udaeta Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 1:02 PM
Thank you! Blessings.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 8:57 AM
I love a poem that gives me goosebumps. Wonderfully evocative skin crawling writing, congratulations on POTD!
Udaeta Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 1:02 PM
Wonderful. I’m so glad. Thank you for your kind words. Blessings.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 8:08 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Have a blessed/wonderful day with your win................
Udaeta Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 1:03 PM
Thank you so much!
May Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 6:34 AM
Very nicely done, Congrats on POTD
Udaeta Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 1:03 PM
Thank you! Blessings.
Rodgers Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 4:49 AM
Dear Melani, Congratulations on your wonderful poem about desires and restraint, which is so well said. I really enjoyed reading and can see why it deserves the POTD. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Udaeta Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 1:04 PM
Thank you!! Blessings.
Greenhough Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 3:02 AM
Congratulations on POTD. That role thing gets old. I enjoyed your poem.
Udaeta Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 1:04 PM
Thank you!!! Blessings
Andresen Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 1:32 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... good work -
Udaeta Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 1:04 PM
Thank you! Blessings
Jones Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 12:33 AM
Congrats on your potd honor!
Udaeta Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 1:04 PM
Thank you. Blessings
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