Speaks Volumes Poet Lyric

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Contest: Your best Audio Poem. Sponsor: Tom Woody. Date first Posted: 1st October 2024

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Thinking of you

"Violinist : Diana Yukawa  Vocals : Jemma  Lyrics : The Poet"
If you start Dianna's video on the 26th second and Jemma's voice recording on the 13th second simultaneously, my words fit exactly to the music.
  
Where do we go to?
Feelings so blue now,
When we think of you.
So many souls are gone now.
Gone forever into the blue.
Lost not forgotten.
Thinking of you.
Thinking of you.
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Where do we go to now?
Where do we go?
Something familiar and new.
Dear one I need you.
I am no where near you .
Feeling this song is for you.
See I long for you now .
All on my own now.
My body longs to know you.
I light a candle loving you now .
longing too.
Longing for you. 
You are my savior. 
I am needing you.
Happy as I am, 
Missing you too.
I do need you close now.
Needing you so.
Where dear are you now?
Seeing you now.
Longing for you I am too.
Longing for you. 
You are my savior. 
I am needing you.
Happy as I am, 
Missing you too.
I do need you close now.
Needing you so.
Where dear are you now?
Seeing you now.

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Zyrool Gifford March 5, 2024 at 12:56 PM It happened to a few other comments I made, you did me a favour as I was surprised when I saw the ??? marks. I had to apologise to everyone. I’m happy you so accepting. Thank you.

Zyrool Gifford March 5, 2024 at 8:20 AM Sincere apologies about the question marks, not sure how that happened. Speaks Volumes March 5, 2024 at 12:34 PM If I don't re-check every thing I type, I type some pretty weird things. I often have to sent a correction Email after I read what I have sent. My excuse is old age, of course I don't presume you have the same excuse. .lol Have a happy day !

Zyrool Gifford March 5, 2024 at 6:50 AM Beautiful ???? Speaks Volumes March 5, 2024 at 12:31 PM heheheheh Well I am kinda glad that you did like it Zyool, but I maintain I wasn't upset, because not every one has the same taste. Thank you for letting me know it was a mistake. Because I am wildly proud of anything that my granddaughter is involved it. I can now thank you for your lovely comment. Cheers Wen Zyrool Gifford March 5, 2024 at 7:35 AM I think it’s beautiful. Not sure why those question marks came up. Sorry about that. Speaks Volumes March 5, 2024 at 7:09 AM Well I think it is. If you don't, you are welcome to your opinion.

Speaks Volumes March 3, 2024 at 11:55 PM I should have written this where folks could read it before.. I f you start Dianna's video on the 26th second and Jemma's voice recording on the 13th second simultaneously, her words fit exactly to the music.

Christina Bowring March 3, 2024 at 11:59 AM My dearest Wen, I’m so happy to be back to congratulate you on your so worthy first place win. Wow - I’m congratulating both you and your beautiful granddaughter Jem for such a magnificent production. For, that’s what it is - more than a poem. An array of emotions felt through the beautiful words, singing and violinist. Now it’s my turn to be proud of you and that I really am. Many congratulations. Your talent shines through here. Hugs and applause dear, sweet friend xx Speaks Volumes March 3, 2024 at 11:52 PM Beautiful Christina, Thank you so much, you r adorable words add to the pleasure of having this song placed in the contest. Wen

Craig Cornish March 3, 2024 at 11:29 AM Bravo! This is how to compose emotion and...your Granddaughter has a special gift for both voice quality and phrasing--not easy with undeveloped coordination of melody and lyrics--so proud of you both! Speaks Volumes March 3, 2024 at 11:50 PM Thanks Craig this was a challenge and a half !! All the research and time was worth it. Jem being in California and me in Sydney Australia made it special for me that we both had a hand in it. She helps my husband write poetry all the time. Many thanks for your acknowledgement of our work. Regards Wen

Ink Empress March 3, 2024 at 10:55 AM Wow! This is perfect especially the singing. I did the same when i wrote mine, i made my sister sing my lyrics few times, to see if it flows. Your lyrics is just so beautiful and the singer did an excellent job. I got goosebumps listening to this! Congratulations on your well deserved win

Karen Jones March 3, 2024 at 10:29 AM Wow I see why you won first place in the contest! This is absolutely gorgeous! Congrats! I agree should be recorded! Speaks Volumes March 3, 2024 at 11:40 PM Thank you sweet Karen

Shane Thacker January 22, 2024 at 2:18 PM Beautiful lyrics, SV. This should be recorded! Speaks Volumes February 9, 2024 at 3:04 AM Thanks Shane. Proud of the way the words fit so perfectly with the beautiful music. Jem singing it brings out the haunting feeling of the words. In her studio I am sure she could engineer a recordable version. Jem's best Aussie friend is a violinist. I have videos of Jem singing to Steph's playing. Diana's playing and the story behind the song certainly gave the song immense feeling. The words I chose were simple, but I think they needed to be that way. Appreciate your comment Shane .. Wen

Vilmos Zoltan Galyo January 12, 2024 at 11:46 PM Fantastic. Very impressive. Speaks Volumes January 12, 2024 at 11:48 PM Thank you Vilmos, I appreciate your comment.

Victor Buhagiar January 12, 2024 at 11:06 PM Seen and heard you addition. Speaks Volumes January 12, 2024 at 11:12 PM That's nice.

Brandy Nicole January 12, 2024 at 7:03 PM So tender and emotional, with a soft touch of beauty. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Congratulations SV, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy Speaks Volumes January 12, 2024 at 11:13 PM Thanks so much Brandy

Maria Williams January 12, 2024 at 6:47 PM How beautiful, is this you singing your wonderful lyrics? The violin playing is divine. A great choice for POTD, congratulations dear ...Hugs Speaks Volumes January 12, 2024 at 11:13 PM Thank you Maria No its my beautiful 28yr old Granddaughter. I Emailed her the Violin Solo and my words. She sent it back to me.

Victor Buhagiar January 12, 2024 at 1:22 PM great potd Speaks Volumes January 12, 2024 at 4:21 PM Thanks so very much- Vocal is now posted. Thanks to my adorable granddaughter.

Constance La France January 12, 2024 at 1:09 PM Speaks, a beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, Constance Speaks Volumes January 12, 2024 at 4:21 PM Thanks so very much- Vocal is now posted. Thanks to my adorable granddaughter.

Paula Goldsmith January 12, 2024 at 12:35 PM Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your powerful write again. Have a wonderful day writing away....................... Speaks Volumes January 12, 2024 at 4:21 PM Thanks so very much- Vocal is now posted. Thanks to my adorable granddaughter.

Jay Narain January 12, 2024 at 10:22 AM Congrats on your POTD, SV! Nicely penned. Speaks Volumes January 12, 2024 at 4:22 PM Thanks so very much- Vocal is now posted. Thanks to my adorable granddaughter.

Bill Baker January 12, 2024 at 10:18 AM Congratulations on your POTD, SV! Enjoy your special day of recognition. Bill Speaks Volumes January 12, 2024 at 4:22 PM Thanks so very much- Vocal is now posted. Thanks to my adorable granddaughter.

Robert Gorelick January 12, 2024 at 9:58 AM Hearty Congratulations on your POTD! I felt melancholy after reading your heart-rending tale. Yes, so many are indeed gone. That horribly tragic crash years ago, also took the life of Kyu Sakamoto, the singer, composer of the iconic popular hit, "Sukiyaki". Thank you for the e-mail sent to me, I found the portraits cute-cuddly yet stately and noble. I will be using Brix's picture for the book! All my best, Robert Speaks Volumes January 12, 2024 at 4:22 PM Thanks so very much- Vocal is now posted. Thanks to my adorable granddaughter.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia January 12, 2024 at 9:03 AM Many Congratulations on the POTD Speaks. Awesome deep poem. Have a nice awarded day! Speaks Volumes January 12, 2024 at 4:24 PM Thanks so very much- Vocal is now posted. Thanks to my adorable granddaughter.

I Am Anaya January 12, 2024 at 7:51 AM Congratulations on your POTD SV! They do a good job incorporating so many of the song titles into their pieces. But it doesn’t compare to lyrics that are genuine and straight from the heart and accompanied by the violinist, Yukawa—hauntingly heartfelt. You would write to her melody like Cornish wants for the contest, a challenging task! Well-done. Health & Love my friend ~Anaya I Am Anaya January 12, 2024 at 5:32 PM Oh, wow, what a beautiful voice! Speaks Volumes January 12, 2024 at 4:24 PM Thanks so very much- Vocal is now posted. Thanks to my adorable granddaughter.

Malabika Ray Choudhury January 12, 2024 at 7:15 AM A deeply poignant lyric - a song of love and longing. Congratulations on honour of POTD! Malabika Ray Choudhury January 12, 2024 at 4:48 PM Listened to the audio and video both. Captivating! Speaks Volumes January 12, 2024 at 4:24 PM Thanks so very much- Vocal is now posted. Thanks to my adorable granddaughter. I Am Anaya January 12, 2024 at 9:43 AM Congratulations on your "Mountains Call Me" Book Mala! :)

Kim Rodrigues January 12, 2024 at 7:02 AM Congratulations on POTD! Speaks Volumes January 12, 2024 at 4:25 PM Thanks so very much- Vocal is now posted. Thanks to my adorable granddaughter.

Linda Alice Fowler January 12, 2024 at 6:58 AM Congratulations on the honor of POTD Svvie! :) Speaks Volumes January 12, 2024 at 4:26 PM Thanks so very much- Vocal is now posted. Thanks to my adorable granddaughter.

Tania Kitchin January 12, 2024 at 5:38 AM Wendy, congratulations on POTD with your heartfelt poem. Speaks Volumes January 12, 2024 at 4:26 PM Thanks so very much- Vocal is now posted. Thanks to my adorable granddaughter.

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