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Thinking of You....

When the leaves fall down As eternal love, A drought hit town Dreams of clouds above When the birds they're excited By the morning glow Or an old poem's recited In a single flow When a dog it dies From sheer cold But the raven still flies Though hundred years old When the old man he sleeps With eyes wide open And the heart it weeps For the word's unspoken When the men in war Shall rest in peace And their mothers too far Got no more wish. Like a beautiful dove In a glorious flight, Or two souls in love In their final night When a couple wish They'd never wed When you cant cherish The joy you get Shall a bullet though small Run through my chest Though my mind may not recall Thinking of you... I shall rest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/2/2009 12:15:00 PM
Sangam, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/25/2009 6:39:00 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/25/2009 2:20:00 PM
Congrats!!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/24/2009 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2009 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/1/2009 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations, Sangam, on having your well-written poem featured this week. Falling out of love is sooo painful. Not even a bullet gives releief as the soul faces The Father in ceaseless death. I hope you're feeling great! Falling back into love isn't easy, but it is possible through daily forgiveness and vigilant kindnesses. Good love.... Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 8/31/2009 11:45:00 PM
Sangam, congrats on your feature this week...Raul
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Date: 8/31/2009 4:09:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
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Date: 8/31/2009 12:52:00 PM
Your poem got better and better as I kept on reading it. Congratulations on getting your poem featured!
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Date: 8/31/2009 7:24:00 AM
This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful pieces. You are great Sangam! Adeleke
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Date: 8/31/2009 4:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sangam. Hope to see many more of yours featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2009 6:56:00 PM
Great write ~ Nice rhyme...Welcome to the Family here on Soup.. I shall read more of your work...Best wishes to you. God Bless, Tyesha
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Date: 3/19/2009 5:15:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup, I shall be thinking of you too.
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Date: 3/18/2009 2:49:00 PM
Wow! This is great. I enjoyed this very much :)
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