Thinking

I lie here thinking And think of tomorrow The day after that And the next days tomorrow Where will i be The day after that Another day passes Another stat Decisions are made Reasoning is passed When decisions are delayed Tomorrow is last So all out there Understand me I very much doubt I will ever be free This statement i say Is from heartfelt sorrow For if no decisions are made Then there is no tomorrow http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life-6.php

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/13/2015 7:39:00 AM

James, I echo the same feelknhs from time to time.. but I may say I learned much and just beljeved that there's always a better tomorrow and indeed sometimes decisions amd stands must be made... There is always tomorrow and its up to us how we want it then but I believe in God's allowable grace ~olive eloisa xxx

James Fraser
Date: 5/13/2015 1:09:00 PM

Olive, I met my better tomorrow back in February this year, and what a better tomorrow I have to look forward to. With God on my side and an Angel, it can only be better. Hugs always, James xxx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/7/2010 2:27:00 PM

Im sure there is a tomorrow for a poet like you James,and if in tomorrow you see sorrow,Skip it and go for the the day after tomorrow,Im seeing the sun,Captain:)Lovely poem, bet I can relate to it too,Lets hope for Rainbows...Scotman..Charma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/6/2010 3:45:00 PM

Oh yes, there will be a tomorrow whether you are where you want to be or not. Interesting topic that you have presented that one needs to make decisions and set goals so that the tomorrows will be what one wants. Of course, there are never no guarantees. Keep the creative and intellectual pen flowing. Sara