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Things I don't think about enough too much

It's chanceless this is the same world This day didn't follow yesterday And Saturday was only connected by electricity I tangle in tethers but I get to the furthest point before smashing back Worst is my flawed expectations Because the people are versions Presenting differently daily Some living on a planet where their days are two cycles of the sun and I'm on days that are spinning round 15 times an hour Different worlds for promises I know it's my fault I'm up in the air whilst others are on the ground Fleetingly on the same page It's flawed on days it matters For all of us out of sync people

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Date: 8/20/2024 11:12:00 PM
A good, good poem that synchronized with me. Unfortunately, for me it's not only different worlds, but also different dimensions. I like this poem. It doesn't need to be down to earth.
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Date: 8/20/2024 11:59:00 PM
Thanks Hilda - we're all in a spin and it's hard to line up long enough to make sense of it all sometimes. We just have to enjoy the moments where we resonate with another. In a world of infinite spinning it does happen. Thanks for your comment x

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